| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, so this is revolving around Kichiro and Gin? Very interesting...twice the twist, twice the fun! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Lisa Carleen On: April 03, 2005 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is gonna be fun! P.S. those sketches are fantastic.
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Title: hehehehe, oh Kich
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:48 EDT
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HA, poor guys doesn't seem to know what he's in for. I can't wait to see his reaction when the lovely Belle shows back up at his office jubilently singing out that she's staying and will take the job. I also get this feeling that Belle will take great pleasure in ruffling the feathers of the good doctor... or maybe I should say raising the hackles? I see no end to the pure fun of this story and the lovableness (I made up a word!) of the character. Now, I wonder how everyone else is doing?
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Reviewed By: yurblegerbil On: April 03, 2005 11:55 EDT
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tying up all the loose ends at once huh? very enterprising.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 01:31 EST
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Hehe, Flirt vs. Flirt! Round one goes to the Brilliant Doctor! *ding ding ding* -- How sly...Gin obviously attracted to Cain and a few sparks fly between Kich and Belle. This is going to be very interesting. -- *ding ding ding* Round 2 - Tag Team, the Izayoi sibs vs. Pup & Pop Zelig from America! -- Sorry, too tired to be anything but silly right now. LoL -I look forward to more.
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Title: Freaking Awesome
Reviewed By: slugscout On: April 03, 2005 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not over exaggerating with my rating. I love your writing so much. You do it with such grace and style. Your characters are like reading about the lives of real people. You have the characters down to a science. And no matter what anyone says that is derrogator you should ignore it because you freaking rock. The only reason I haven't reviewed your other stuff is your so freaking fast at updating I don't get a chance! But anyways, I love your stories. Please keep writing and don't stop!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: April 02, 2005 23:34 EST
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Oh good god! JACKPOT! that's what this story is. Are you sure the final thought wasn't what you are saying as we read this story because you sooo have us all hooked, haha. Amazing, Sue, simply amazing. And so the plot thickens. I see our Mr. Tall, Dark, and Handsome has a daughter, a naughty daughter at that, haha. But I think that I may grow to love her too. Know what? I absolutely love the name Cain. Cain, Cain, Cain, so fun to say. hehehehe. Great work! keep it up. I loves it!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:23 EST
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WHOA! TwO plots going on and their related by a father and his daughter along with a brother and sister....hmmm.....this is gonna be interesting!! haha i'm luvin the story so far n its only the 2nd chapter!
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: April 02, 2005 20:06 EST
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waaaaaaaaaaahh. ahhahahaaa. im laughing cuz this is ANOTHER one of your purity continuations. its awsome. you never seem to stop. heh. just asking..are you gonna do a purity 5 with kich? that would be so rad. crappers. okay, cool fic! love the purity continuations.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 02, 2005 18:45 EST
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Just what do you have planned?? .. hum. bro and sis could both end up married/mated into the same family?? double hummmm... alas - I'll have to wait for those answers.
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 02, 2005 18:26 EST
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Great chapter!!!! I adore the Kichiro!!! These two are gonna be rather interesting together I love them already! And heh I think Cain could give Inuyasha a run for his money on protective father of the year award. They have that in commen at least! With every new tidbit I just get more and more interested in this story. And it's Kichiro how can I not adore it!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:50 EST
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First - so the older brother is attracted to the daughter of the guy the youngest sister is after? This ought to be fun! *laughs* Not that age is likely that big of a deal in the youkai world - I'm sure. Anywho, also have to say that if that is what the guys in your fiction look like then I seriously need to move into your world - damn ... okay, yeah, it has been "a while" but ... they're hot! Something is very wrong with me being attracted to drawings of fictional characters that someone else came up with *sigh* But ... they're hot! *shakes head* I really need to get out more ... *grin*
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:43 EST
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Ooooooooo I am impressed...tackling TWO storylines at once? Oh the madness....why do I predict mass carnage ahead...Yasha attacks Cain, Cain attacks Kichiro...and Ryo just stands on the sidelines laughing his head off while Sesshoumaru rolls his eyes next to him. Oh the possibilities. I love the character of Belle so far, she's such a pretender! Great set up!!! Can't wait for the ride!!!
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Reviewed By: rowan_lynn(nsi) On: April 02, 2005 17:08 EST
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ooooooo.....two pairings in one story, you spoil us Sue. Thanks for updating on the weekend! It was a wonderful chapter!
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Title: *rolls around in her urn*
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in On: April 02, 2005 16:58 EST
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I love it I love it I love it! Hehe Kich is so cool. Heh. He's gonna be in trouble when Bella shows back up! Hehehehehehe.
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