| "Lost Hopes" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Title: Chapt. 31
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 21:43 EDT
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You go Sango!! Great job of telling Kagome off! I loved this part - really good reading. It was a nice summary of everything too. Kagome is showing a lot of immaturity for her age at 19 - she was more compassionate and caring at the beginning of their adventures. Maybe she has a 'little' problem with her hormones? Kagome hasn't put the information from Sango that Inuyasha has already been pregnant together with Kouga telling her that she killed his child. Poor Sango and Miroku, what a way to find out happend to Inuyasha's first pup. How will Kagome react when it all sinks in? Enjoyed Miroku driving the point home that Inuyasha is a demon at heart and she really messed up with her treatment of him.
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Title: Chapt. 30
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 20:39 EDT
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Kayia and Katashi had twin boys!! A sign of good fortune I believe. What are their names? HURRAH!! Inuyasha freed himself; that was so sweet and wonderful. He sure has come a long way. Nice action scene involving key members of the clan. Kagome is so dense--she thinks the world revolves around her not matter what the situation. She didn't even react when Kouga yelled at her for trying to hurt his mate. Talk about hearing only what you want to hear! Ooooh, can't wait to find out what Hotaru has planned for Kagome. Maybe she'll wind up washing diapers for all of the clans new pups for the next year by hand or cleaning up all the little 'accidents' that the pups will make while they're learning bladder control!? Or …..???? Very nice to see Kirara here; she has been the only member of Inuyasha's former pack that really understood him I think. She was supportive when he was trying to teach himself how to use his sword and mothered him when he was hurt and exhausted. I hope she gets to stay around for awhile; she would be a great 'pupsitter'. Now to read your next chapter and see what else happened.
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Title: oh
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 16:29 EDT
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Oh can't you just feed her to the dogs already... I'm sure they'd have quite the feast,lol actually no she deserves to suffer, instant death is much to nice for the dumb Miko. Well any way I'm sure what ever you do will be more than worth the wait, nice update! Cheers! oh yeah and Go SANGO! I always liked her better than Kagome any way
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Reviewed By: Slayer66 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When Kagome told Inuyasha to sit I almost cried even though I was convinced that you wouldn't have had Kagome hurt Kouga and Inuyasha's pup. But I hope Inuyasha yells at Kagome, or says something that makes her feel like scum. 10/10 and I can't wait for your next update ^.^
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 19:44 EDT
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YES!!! FINALLY THAT BITCH GOT WHAT SHE DESEREVED. shes lucky i wasnt sango i would've beet her to a pulp until she shut up anyway lol that was a great chapter i hope she dies or something i would love u forever is she did :) lol update!
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Reviewed By: SoarMore_FlyHigher [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 08:37 EDT
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My god. Kagome is horrible! I hope your going to bring her personality back to normal by the end. Anyway, it was a good chapter (Go Sango. Go Sango!) but I saw a lot of spelling mistakes and words missing that I normally don't see from you. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 14:18 EDT
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Oh thank you thank you thank you... I'm not sure I'd be able to stomach my favorite Inuyasha being attacked by that vile witch. Have I mentioned that I absolutely love your Sango, if I haven't then I'll say it now, I absolutely love you Sango. Thanks ever so much for giving Kagome what she deserves and I look forward to more. Cheers!
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Title: jamc79
Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 11:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this fanfic. I like that although InuYasha was OOC it was explained well as to why he didn't act the same. Having one of the first things Kagome says being 'SIT BOY' when finally seeing InuYasha again in Ch.30 is just what I imagined she would do. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: SoarMore_FlyHigher [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 15:36 EDT
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EEE! Good story! A bit over done, with the Inu Yasha and the M-preg, but still, it's a good story. I hope you continue and that your new beta wont disappear on ya.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 19:06 EDT
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finally that bitch got what was commign damn i hate her she ruins the whole fuckin show in general anyway lol update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 14:36 EDT
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THAT BITCH I HAAATE HER KILLL HERR! OMG I CRYING WRITE NOW SHES SUCH A BITCH trying to calm down right now but oomg for real i HATE KAGOME N I HOPE KOUGA GETS HER DUMB HOE
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Title: Chapt. 29
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the flashbacks - Inuyasha hiding in a tree, grumping and growling constantly and giving everyone a hard time. And the flashback with the meal: poor Kaiya! She's got morning sickness and Inuyasha is showing no empathy whatsoever. LOL He, oh so innocently, tells her that the food is wonderful and she should try some. Pretty impressive that Inuyasha and Kouga managed to hide his monthly transformation from Keiko. Oh that evil, evil, cliffy!! The wicked miko of the modern era shows up! She's not too bright - picking on Inuyasha in the middle of practically the whole wolf clan. If Kouga had only told Inuyasha what was going on instead of yelling at him to stay put. Some major self-tail pulling is coming up on Kouga's part! Will Inuyasha be able to save himself and his cub? Will Hotaru be there in time? Or, will Kouga save his mate? Run Kouga! Run!!
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Title: Chapy. 28
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last, Inuyasha and Kouga have some really great quality time together! But not for long - LOL - 'cause here come the relatives!! It's a good thing they had a chance to work out some major issues for themselves before the family arrived. The whole chapter was nicely done. Both of them have matured. Kouga seems a little more supportive and understanding but he still is somewhat of a controller. But then if he wasn't that way, he wouldn't be the Kouga we have come to know. Then where would the story line be!
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Reviewed By: SoarMore_FlyHigher [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 19:48 EDT
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An awesome story, I say. It's not the best though. I don't mind how people need to get her out of the way when making an InuKouga pairing, but why make her such a bitch? I mean, OOC is sometimes nice, but Kagome is way more understanding. You're writing is great, the organization and grammar is awesome and I think you are a great author. I just can't say it's the best 'cause it's not, at least to me. Don't take this hard, it is awesome, and I will continue to read it, I just can't bring my self to say this is one of the coolest InuKou stories. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: acr On: August 11, 2006 01:05 EDT
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Glad things are picking up. the fluffiness and OCs were getting tiresome.
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