| "Lost Hopes" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 00:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story please write more like this! Puppy eyes!!!
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Title: Chapt. 35
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL...Kouga's brains turning to mush in the middle of his pompous rant at Inuyasha when he realizes his mate is ready to birth any second! The kids are so cute!! And I like their names; I can just imagine Nozomi and Itsuki ganging up on Hiroshi when he tries to pull rank on them because he's the eldest. I can't believe it's the end of the story already...it would be great if you could add an epilog. puppy eyes...please? Thanks for a great story!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME story it was awsome. I love the names of the pups.
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Reviewed By: wolfluv On: July 29, 2007 11:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read this story countless times and i wait with baited breath for the next chapters! I was so releaved when i saw your most recent chapter that was last month! most don't finish what they start and i know how hard it is but please keep trying your best because that is what i have seen in your work ten fold! I have also read this story on two other sites! and I still love it so! as for any tips on what you might want to write for the next chapter i think Sango punishment should be to work for Kouga's Mom and Miroku shoud work with grandma because he is a monk and maybe even though he my not have the wind tunnel any more he did suck up a lot of demons where did they go? maybe grandma see's them and realies he could use those powers under guidence? they were just a few thoughts. Oh and Sango should work for mom because she does know demon anatomy! maybe other lands they share treaty's with need her healing remidiy's and Sango could help her figure out the best way to do this?
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Title: Down with Kagome
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:26 EDT
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Nice, really nice, yes throwing Kagome in a pile of dung is quite fitting indeed, snorts, I look forward to more. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I am so happy that u updated...it has been so long but i havent forgotten...so please update soon I am so happy *sniff* thanks it was wonderful as every previous chapter and good luck to inuyasha on the delivery should be interesting with his attitude...
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Reviewed By: Frozen_mask On: June 22, 2007 04:30 EDT
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The beginning I loved. this in the beginning would have been my favorite I liked the concept and how you wrote it. I read many kouga inuyasha mating ones and yours my favorite I disagree with the bashing though. I'm telling you I hate kagome but this made me feel sorry for her. I found it irritating that kagome should be punished so bad when kouga gets off scott free when he almost did the same crime. If she just stayed in her worldand never came back... The part of having one person to have sex part didn't make sence when it was in the beginning the sister didn't mind that kouga was just having sex which was normal with concent and he marked him as omega so he could make kagome his alpha. Sorry if this doesn't make sence or I irritate you but I really liked your fic and when I really like something I think about it a lot. glad I came here though loved the sex that was taked out of in ff.net
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Me On: June 21, 2007 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the Best stories I've ever read! You Must Keep Writing! Bring on the K9 Babies!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!! Inu was about to fuck her up something bad man. Gotta love I hope she get more of that she needs a ass kicking. Update when ya can k
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Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. In my opinion Kagome is acting a little OCC, but overall very well done! My congratulations to you and I hope Inuyasha and Kouga have a long, happy life together. Oh, one more thing, when is the next lemony goodness?
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: kereiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have had reviews by me on ff.net as the user "tandeki" ^_^ So you already know i totally adore your fics, i just felt like reviewing here too, lol. Love it heaps, keep up the great works ^_~ OH! and something i forgot to say on my other review, lol, is that im glad of the punishment you gave kagome XD heheh
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: LumiWolf On: May 08, 2007 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great story. Ihad just started reading this on Saturday, and I must say this was the best fanfic that I've ever read. I even cried when Inu lost the child the first time. You kept me in suspense and had me wanting to read more and more. I really appreciate what you've done, and I hope that you make more stories worth other people's while. Or even become a writer or something. I mean seriously, it was a great story. Anywho, Ja ne.
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Title: Dissapointed? Nope
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 23:19 EDT
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I'm not disappointed, I'm actually quite pleased with your results after 14 times. Kagome's punishment is quite fitting indeed, though death would have put an even bigger smile on my face but hey, she's get her just desserts one way or another and then it will be a happy day. On another note, I know it's probably still a ways away but I really want Kouga and Inuyasha's pups to be born already. sighs, ah well good things come to those who wait. And I can't wait for more. Cheers!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Don't end your story Last Hopes. Inuyasha didn't have his pups.
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