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Reviewed By: aquariuschick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, but please update it! i've been waiting for almost 2 weeks GIVE ME AN UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 23:31 EDT
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well............its interesting, i'll give it that. im not used to the InuYasha and Koga pairing. the matter of fact i don't particulary care for any gay or lezbian pairing in InuYasha characters. don't find its really in their character, except Jackotsu of course. im more of a Inu and Kag fan myself but i wanted to try seeing some body elses view on a gay or lezbian pair. i didn't enjoy it but if i did i would say its very good, pat on the back. i read all of your chaps for this but i think im gonna stick to the one time review. im just not into it, please don't be angry with me. i like your story but its not my cup of tea is all. thanks for the read! im deeply sorry if it offended you. this tis a good saga.
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Title: I know, I know ^_^
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 21:44 EDT
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What's little is Inuyasha's animal form. His true dog form is a lot smaller than Kogas and, of course, Inu feels slighted. How much younger is Inu compared to Koga. I'm sure you mentioned it earlier in the fic, but I forgot. I'm really anxious to see the confrontation between Inu and Kagome. I would love for Koga to grab that girl by the scruff of her neck and force her to remove those damn beads. I'm also hoping for a hot and long lemon next chapter. After all Koga's been gone for a few weeks ^_^ I love the grandma, she's a hoot, lol. And Koga's dad is priceless the way he treats Koga like kit.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man ...so good...please update...you have great writing skilld and it flows very well...i can't wait till the next mating season :3
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Title: Go Grannie! Go!
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hotaru saves the hanyou! Alright Grandma Hotaru - way to go!! That is so cool that she can teach Inuyasha how to transform. Will she and Inuyasha be able to keep it a secret from the tribe as well as his new literary skills? And if she can teach him how to control his 'wild side', can she help him get rid of that nasty necklace? Thanks for another great chapter. Bibi
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to laugh, Grandma Hotaru sure knows how to get her way! Everyone seems to be afraid to go against her, except for Inuyasha. He at least gets up the nerve to stand up to her (LOL, in his own way) and growl and grumble and she lets him do it. I was glad to see that she stepped in though during the war council and took over, Inuyasha has been out of 'battle readiness' for too long. Has she been secretly testing him every time she pesters him in the same way that Sesshoumaru tests him through sword fights to make him stronger? If she is, no wonder Inuyasha worries about her motives. That's being sneaky! Double glad Grandma Hotaru was able to calm Inuyasha when he went full-demon! And, at long last he got the chance to prove to himself that he is capable of protecting what is his; his family and most importantly, his 'pups'. As the alpha 'female' all pups in the clan are ultimately his. He deserves to be pleased with himself for his victory over those truly vile hyenas. I just hope that he heals from the battle okay; it has taken him so long to recover from all that has happened to him in such a short time. Looking forward to more of the story!
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to find out what evil minions of Naraku's are still around that Kouga is protecting Inuyasha from. If Kouga was injured while fighting so far away, would Inuyasha feel that something was wrong from his aura or mate mark? Likewise, would Kouga know if his mate was injured or sick? Kagome is still so evil! LOL!! I keep picturing her as the 'Wicked Witch of the West' from the 'Wizard of Oz' movie, pedaling her bicycle yelling in a crazy way "I'll get you, my stupid hanyou!" She really is trying her hardest to put all the blame on poor Inuyasha for her horrible behavior and attitude and make him pay by pounding him to death with that nasty rosary. Thank goodness Sango and Miroko and the others are on Inuyasha's side!
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Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It looks like Mashiro and Keiko can't wait to be grandparents. Which brings up a question about Kaiya. Why is she is delaying having pups with her mate; is she waiting until Kouga starts his family first? I can just imagine her and Inuyasha ganging up on their mates and making them watch the pups while they have a 'girls' night (or day) out! LOL
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Reviewed By: Misty Rose On: January 06, 2006 06:25 EST
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Can't wait till you update..
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Title: O snap
Reviewed By: JJIndiana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, that was orgasmic! I just can't get enough of your writing. I saw that someone drew a pic and it reminded me of two drawing i did that were inspired by your story: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/183026 http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/183029 Is this the last chapter? I hope not cuz this story is just too good
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Reviewed By: Shinna On: November 19, 2005 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes i wanna see lemon in the next chapter. Very anxious to read the next chapter.
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Title: Last Hoprs
Reviewed By: Smallcat On: November 19, 2005 12:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleas write .i have been read this from the beganing so keep writeing.
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Reviewed By: klairna On: September 08, 2005 15:12 EDT
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Hey girl, ur doing great on this story, but what's up? it's been a week already. School? Mine just started yesterday so that's what i'm expecting, but give me a heads up if ur not going to update for a while. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sweetums [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 15:25 EDT
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HI!!! OMFG!!!!!!111oneone11!one >_> Kagome is such a BITCH! _> >_< This is really touching, and great! WONDERFUL! I hope you update again soon!!!! ^_________^ And I just wanted to say to Inuyasha; 'You poor thing you...god....' It made me cry hard when he said he was worthless....how horrid. I was really horrified and upset at Kouga at first, because he denied the poor inu his love, causing them to...to loose...the..pup...-bursts out in tears, a mess- ;~;
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Reviewed By: Kimbo On: August 26, 2005 17:34 EDT
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i almost started crying i love it so touching update soon
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