| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: ama_tori * you know the drill* On: July 11, 2005 21:46 CDT
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poor rin :(
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: hobbitfancier77 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the suspence is killing me.... i need mroe to read...thats a lieim reading like 15 fanfictions...welll i need mroe really entertaining and good thigns to read...AKA...your story update soon
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Title: when i tell you when?
Reviewed By: habby On: July 10, 2005 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only thing that i have to say is update and great work.
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Reviewed By: Hadyia Spark On: July 08, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! please write more?
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Reviewed By: Hadyia Spark On: July 08, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! please write more?
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: July 08, 2005 12:06 CDT
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*wipes tear from eye* aww, that's so sad! that's evil to do that to shippo! I NEED MORE!! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor shippo!!!!
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Title: Good Chapter
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 05, 2005 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really liked this chapter. It seems that Rin has finally gotten both Inu brothers to calm in front of her. She is truly a handful but I think that both brothers can handle that. I'm glad with the marking ritual between Sango and Inuyasha although I wonder if Sango realizes that it was just done to protect her from the poison. I hope that Kagome and Shippou are OK you haven't mentioned them in the past 2 chapters. So I guess I'll just have to wait and see when the next chapter will be told. I really hope that all is going well for them too. It seems that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru will be in for quite a rude awakening when they go and see Kagome with Rin. Hopefully it will be a good thing however with Kagome and Shippou both pretty badly hurt from the dear I hope that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru don't see that as a betrayal to the one that had taken her away from them. Well I guess I just have to wait and see until the next chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!! THANKS.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 01:27 CDT
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OMFG! i'm actually logged in!! :O lol, *sigh* i wish i was rin in that situation... i'd luv to have yashie as a brother/father figure... romantic would be awesome fine too :P *stares dreamily at life-sized pic of yashie*
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I love it, I LOVE TI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 19:36 CDT
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This is doing really good. I can't wait for more. I wonder what the guys will think of her living there with the other young youkai. Update soon, late.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 23, 2005 17:46 CDT
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wow! that was a sudden twist!! i like it!! i think kag/kimi wouldn't be a half bad pairing, but it would work best if Miroku died first, so as not to make it seem like she's rejecting him... but that seems to be the direction you're taking with the story anyways =^_^=
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 23, 2005 17:46 CDT
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wow! that was a sudden twist!! i like it!! i think kag/kimi wouldn't be a half bad pairing, but it would work best if Miroku died first, so as not to make it seem like she's rejecting him... but that seems to be the direction you're taking with the story anyways =^_^=
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Reviewed By: snowecat29 On: June 22, 2005 19:53 CDT
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Sounds like Sango has appendicitis or something. Is she gonna be alright? I don't think Miroku is the sharing type, so that youkai had best watch his step. It's good to see him jealous though. It's cool to see that you are taking the seldom-used path of both Sess and Inu taking Kagome as their mate. She is the perfect counterbalace for the both of them, though what about Sess's vassals and such? How will they react to both human and hanyou? Hope for some more drama soon.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 20, 2005 21:10 CDT
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awwww, very long chapter!!! YAY!!!! i don't know what to think. it was so good, it was deep too. ^^
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