| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 20, 2005 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omg i havent laughed that hard in forever, the beginning back was just hilarious! my sides hurt! great chapter....nicely balanced between funny and mouth watering smut, but now im going through withdrawl...must have more.....yes yes! plz plz *gets down on knees* update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Black_widow(notsignedin) On: June 16, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE AND SOON!! -Ja ne. -Blue
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 03:03 CDT
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wow, what a fantasy. I've never wanted to be Kagome more :blush: well anyway, I'm not sure how much more of this incredible sweetness I can take. is it time for more conflict? where is Naraku? I await your next chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would do anything to switch places with Kagome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, I was Just woundering if or when theres going to be a lemon!! I just LOVE your lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: usakogeisha On: June 09, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this story the interaction between the three of them are wonderful very tastefull can not waite to read more
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 09, 2005 20:23 CDT
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KAAAAAAAAAAAWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it! Can't get enough of it. Update again soon or I think I'll die from withdrawl! lol.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 18:48 CDT
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Ooh, a threesome. I do like this. I was thinking you were goin in this direction. Just all the interaction between them before the kiss hinted at it. Hope to see more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 07, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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im laughing so hard im crying over here! omg, kags really did get the best of both of them didnt she! wonderful story....so sad about kags family....made me cry. :( keep up the wonderful work...i'm crossing my fingers that theres a lemon in the near future.....*wink wink hint hint* if you need some help with writing threesomes, drop me a line, id be happy to help. jessylang@sbcglobal.net anyway, great work...update again soooooooon pleaseeeeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 15:05 CDT
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I love it! It's a lot of fun and I like how you are shaping things. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! IT'S A SESSY/KAG/INU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 11:29 CDT
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So they are going to share? hm... ok. I like the interaction between Inuyasha and Rin ^_^ and I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *as if* On: June 07, 2005 09:32 CDT
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YAY!! Sess/kag/inu!!!! *does happy dance* awesum chappie!!! *cheers*
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sessy!!!!! *crys for sessy*
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 04, 2005 23:38 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
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