| "Moving On" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 00:48 CDT
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WHAT!!!! How could you just leave it there!?!?!? I feel like a doggy who's been tossed a bone on a string...omgggggg....sooo good!! Kagome shoulda whupped her ass better, woo woo!!
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Reviewed By: demon godess On: October 09, 2006 00:15 CDT
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hey evil clify. I LOVE IT. U R DOIND SUCH A GREAT JOB. KEEP IT UP.
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Reviewed By: CanineKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good update soon i want to know her answer
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Yeah Kagome, give that b***h what she deserves!! Instead of spit in her face, Kikyo should be sporting a black eye! Spit comes off. Awesome chapter anyway, until next chapter~ B reading U!
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Title: inugrl27
Reviewed By: Lihz On: October 08, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY I LOVED THIS CHAPPIE AND U LEFT IT ON A CLIFFIE!!! dundun dunnnnn lol WELL I HOPE U UP DATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: forsakenfaith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to make them be together! You just have to! I love how shessy is in this. He's so cute and nice. :D *Squeels* I just want to jump him. *coughs* I mean shake his hand warmly..? jk. Great job. I love the idea of the story. It's very good. I like how you write. please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens.-Forsaken faith
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Title: chpt 1 - 20
Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn it took me 1 h en 30 mins to read all chpts plz update soon!!!!!!!!! luv ya damn kikyo is SUCK A FUCKIN BITCHY SLUT!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: loopylion On: September 28, 2006 23:58 CDT
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Inuyasha really pisses me off, so he's allowed to have all the sex he wants, but Kagome is supposed to stay on the side like a good little toy while he has his fun?! I do not think so. It would serve him right if she had sex with someone else, hell, I hope she does sleep woth someone, like Kouga. Maybe then he'll come to his senses about Kagome, the little fucker!
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Reviewed By: Koski [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 21:32 CDT
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Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 00:06 CDT
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hey this fic is really good, especially for a first fic. there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but whatever, it doesn't bother me so just keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: D. Child On: June 13, 2006 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great but, the sex was like something that is alote like other sex seen i have seen, read, or dun. But i think u should make sex seen more like think that will realy happen, like some of your sex seen that u have dun. And a little fantasy is always good. but over all it was great. PS. get back to me at d_child2000@yahoo.com
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Title: Kittenyoukai
Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 20:43 CDT
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WONDERFUL, TERRIFIC, EXCELLENT chapter my friend. Continue on the progress YOU'RE AWESOME. =3 >From Kittenyoukai
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter A+! Keep it coming!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: lihz On: June 09, 2006 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg gos i want mooooooreeee!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooon plzzzzzz u haaaveeeeeeeeeeeee tooooooooooooooooo pllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooon
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Reviewed By: u know On: June 02, 2006 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
like loved it
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