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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 23:18 CDT
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this is a good story. i hope you update soon
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Title: B**** FIGHT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA KAGOME-KIKYO SLAPDOWN!!!!!! No, but really, I love it!!! Inuyasha is hot, Hojo is stupid, and I love what brings Kagome to Inuyasha's bed. I read this fic a while back, but you hadn't updated it in so long that I stopped checking to see if you'd updated yet. I don't think I had an account back then, but if I did, I'm sure it was one of my favorites. Nice storyline. Originality rating's down 'cause there're alot of fics out there about Inuyasha as a lawyer and Kagome working for a magazine, but I think you were one of the first to present the idea. Spelling and Grammar need some work. Chapters are rather short, but if that means you update more often, then more power to ya!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This FIC!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
one word. Nice
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Reviewed By: biglaugher113 On: December 26, 2006 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fanfic. But you just had to keave me in suspense, right. Nah, i'm just messin'. Plz update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 17:27 CST
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i really like this chap. good job. please update soon.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so what can I say... for this fic you had my breath held for such a long time and then you finally posted...YAY! , as for the plot of the last chapter I have a entire bunch of questions but I'll stick to at most 10...okay here goes... 1. Does Kikyo role in this story end here or does she come back to be a physcotic bitch? 2. Would the next chapter be a lemon/lime or both? 3. What's up with Hiten? Is he gay? 4. InuYasha is such a player? Did he learn the tricks of the trade from the one and only, Miroku? 5. Where are Miroku and Sango in this story? (Come on they gotta be included in this mess) Okay... I limited my questions to like 5 so I hope they're answered soon! Great job but I want more! Can't wait for the next update! My hunger is not satiated quite yet...
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*puppy face with the works(you know quivering lip and all)* PLEASE UPDATE AS OFFTEN AS YOU CAN and please dont be one of those people who just abbandon a great story scratch that AWSOME story
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Title: Awesome Fight Comeback!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the recent chapter...no- I LOVE THE RECENT CHAPTER!... it was simply hilariuos and so comforting to know things were coming along and the ease finally taking hold! Rin making Sesshy nervous, or get "TURNED ON"... now that is so hilarious, I couldn't even breathe do to constant laughter. Aww, Kags and Inu are 2gether 4ever...so cute! Kikyo is what really made me laugh. How can anyone have such a huge tough persona and act such like a wimp when faced with her greatest dangers...lolz, "KAGOME LOOSE IT?", now I really want to know how can Kagome loose it and what would she do then? Somehow my mind kept drifting back to the other couple, Miro/San, what happened to them in this story? Doesn't matter though, the story is simply hilarious and funny the way it is now...I really can't wait for the next chapter. How would Kagome pay Inuyasha back for turning him on? What happens when Kagome looses it? What would Rin and Sesshoumaru be doing at his house? *wink, wink* (FINALLY...lolz)What would Hiten say to Kagome's new boyfriend? So much more has to be answered... so update as soon as you can and Great Job!
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Reviewed By: forsakenfaith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA HA!!! DAMN STRAIGHT! KICK THAT BITCHES ASS!!! lol. Kick ass job. I loved it. Please update. soon. (puppy dog pout)
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Rin and Sess side story it was sweet, I hope to read more of it. I'm sick of Kikyo! Kagome please THROW THAT CHICKENHEAD DOWN A FLIGHT OF STAIRS! A good old fashion catfight is what's needed here! Kagome 2 hits to the body- 1 to the head! The story is great can't wait for more~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. For your first fic this is really good. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
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Title: OOOOOMGGGGG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG 333 On: October 13, 2006 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this is your first fanfic then you are good!!! The story line is extent, and easy to follow. The only thing I see wrong is you lack details, but that will Chang as you gain experience... "I'm not a fan of short chapters ,but as long as the updates keep coming on a regular basis I shale hold back the DEMON HOUNDS for now!!! I really like it when KAGOME got mad and took charge of the situation it shows her strength of character and that she's not afraid to stand up for herself!!! Keep up the good work and update soon.... I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a couple of hours before coming home!!!! O;DDOG333
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 22:36 CDT
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That is so not cool, I demand another chapter, well I don't think I can do that exactly since you have to type the next chapter and all that jazz. I love this story, it definitely pulls you in. I Like it. I hope your muse comes to you soon so we can have another chapter. I want to see some more Kinky-hoe bashing. I hate that bitch. I hope you update as soon as possible. Happy writings and a Merry Muse.
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way your story was going so far and I think it's absolutely awesome but it only lacks one thing and that is detail descriptions about the surroundings and other things... I get the mental picture pretty much and Just loving this story so much now! Can't wait for the next update... when was the last time you were here? lolz, Have fun with life and make the next update awesome!
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