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Reviewed By: baby blue On: August 11, 2005 16:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
good again
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Title: slang
Reviewed By: Kerica On: August 11, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and plot is really good, and I could only find one thing wrong. You continuesly put I am, or did not, or other wordings like that that sound nothing like what a 23 year old would say. It's fine when they're mad, or pretending to be mad at eachother, but in normal speach you should use didn't, or I'm more often. Just a suggestion. Luvvers~~~~Kerica~~~~
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol loved the story! i cant wait for the next chappie!! keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was a really sweet chapter! There's an enviable relationship between Inu and Kags.Except that smirk, that InuYasha have... And I've got to mention that the scene with Sessy and Rin was funny:)
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Reviewed By: Midnight1213 On: August 10, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story! so update my sanity depends on it! .... yeah thats how great ur story is so keep up the great work and update soo pleeeeeeeeeeeeez -(realname....didnt feel like logging in) Midnight1212
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Reviewed By: baby blue On: August 09, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
good
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job, i really like your writing style... this story is getting really interesting... hope you update soon!!! please... lol
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 10:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story please write more chapters real soon. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes thanks oh and my name is Nyah i am 15 and i spend most of my time on this website reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours please email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you write another chapter
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 16:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
bada bababa i'm lovin it
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Haha! Inu Yasha is cooking? It's pretty funny! I'm still laughing. And I don't think it's cliché...
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...interesting fic. I found it a bit cliche (or in the terms of fiction, mary sue). Nevertheless it was fairly well done (excluding the couple spelling/grammatical errors here and there). I'm interested to see what happens next in this whirlwind romance. Keep up the good work! Until next, Claire ^_^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job. update soon.
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Reviewed By: baby blue On: August 07, 2005 17:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
glad you are back
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good. Update soon! Peace!!!
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