| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: bellaluna10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2010 00:34 CST
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Hi Vyncent! This story is amazing! Please, don't leave us with this cliffhanger! Is the story complete or is there still more to come? Keep up the incredible work! Can't wait to read the conclusion! All the best, A Vyncent Fan!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 14:57 CDT
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Hey, I was wondering if you were ever going to finish this fic. It's one of my absolute favorites, and I realize it's been about 2 years since the last update. I'm dying to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 07:10 CDT
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this is good update soon
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Title: The Poison of Erised!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 00:53 CST
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I have really enjoyed this story and I have read so many of your comments under 'kagess' and other sites, and never realized you wrote stories too.... Go figure, huh? Well, Just wanted to say "THANKS" for your story to date, and when can we expect an update (I checked Single Spark, MediaMiner, and AdultFanFiction and Media and AFF had thru ch16, but SSpark only had thru 13 or 14. The last update was March 2006 according to notes, and I just wanted to check that I had the right follow up links to where your story is posted. It is a great story, (and I am now proceeding to your other stories posted under each of the 3 areas-SS,MM,AFF). PLEASE DON'T KEEP US IN SUSPENSE ANY LONGER ---- 9 MONTHS IS CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT. Even Sess would have mercy on us at this point (doncha think?) and InuYasha would have given up before April came along... hahaha. Sincerely, Rhonda Mann
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Reviewed By: EmpyrealFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 22:24 CDT
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I just wanted to tell you that I adore all your works...and I hope to see more of Poison soon! I just finished reading Unworthy One...and I am in awe of your skill as a writer. ^__^ I even came all the way over here from SS to make sure you got my review. Ciao, and you are one of my absolute favourtie fanfic writers. XD
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its done? No way...it is so good you can't leave the plot at its climax./.please update for an epilogue or something...my heart began to hurt so much i almost cried...please write an epilogue so my heart can be at ease :3
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Title: Oi! What of Inu?
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, well written, great plot, I could go on. You make us all feel so sympathetic for Inuyasha. I hope that you won't leave him heart broken. Despite his defensive posturing, I still love the little hanyou and hate to see him suffer. Oh yes, and I do have all of the other questions that you listed, but there is no sense in repeating them, ne? Thanks for a wonderful read Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:02 CST
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*Yawn* Not one of your best chapters. Put some kind of action into it. Please? I love your story, just not this last chapter.
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 05:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I missed reading this story!! I was starting to worry that you had given up on it, and its soooo goood!!!! so please PLEASE please UPDATE SOON I love this story and I only wish I could read it more!!!! I gotta know what happens next!!! I mean with kagome and sess, please!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on please update this is like one of my favorite fanfics and u havent updated in forever, stop with the suspense. Please please please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Animeotakubara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 20:43 CST
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Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: mycene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fic, and I'm finding that I enjoy it even though I don't like this pairing. Great job with that! The language is very fluid and graceful when you use English words. It's somehow not overly dramatic like others who fail to write like you do ^^ However, my only problem is your use of Japanese words. It's not that I don't know them- I am near-fluent in the language. There are parts where certain Japanese words did not seem to enhance the tone. More importantly that that, though, is the -diction- of some words. For example I can't picture Sesshoumaru's excessive use of "hai." It sounds too subservient for him to use; maybe "Aa," or even a "Sou," would have been a little more fitting? Unfortunately I reached a point where I needed to stop reading because of this... it was distracting. I will continue reading this story at a later time, despite this fact, though. I'd love to see how things turn out, and I was immediately interested in this story as soon as I read the reasons why Sesshoumaru wanted Kagome for himself. Such great ideas, that made more sense than a typical Sess/Kag story. Reading how Kagome's abilities were balanced was also something that piqued my interest a lot more. So overall, this is a great read! I just have to take it in smaller doses. Thanks for a wonderful work.
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Reviewed By: Blue_silver_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, wow, wow, so is Kagome finally going to meet up with Sesshoumaru without the potion? is the gang finally going to know what's happening? is Inuyasha gonna get the beating he deserves for being such an idiot? I can't wait to find out! so keep up the great work and update soon!!
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