| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 05:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I missed reading this story!! I was starting to worry that you had given up on it, and its soooo goood!!!! so please PLEASE please UPDATE SOON I love this story and I only wish I could read it more!!!! I gotta know what happens next!!! I mean with kagome and sess, please!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on please update this is like one of my favorite fanfics and u havent updated in forever, stop with the suspense. Please please please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Animeotakubara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: mycene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fic, and I'm finding that I enjoy it even though I don't like this pairing. Great job with that! The language is very fluid and graceful when you use English words. It's somehow not overly dramatic like others who fail to write like you do ^^ However, my only problem is your use of Japanese words. It's not that I don't know them- I am near-fluent in the language. There are parts where certain Japanese words did not seem to enhance the tone. More importantly that that, though, is the -diction- of some words. For example I can't picture Sesshoumaru's excessive use of "hai." It sounds too subservient for him to use; maybe "Aa," or even a "Sou," would have been a little more fitting? Unfortunately I reached a point where I needed to stop reading because of this... it was distracting. I will continue reading this story at a later time, despite this fact, though. I'd love to see how things turn out, and I was immediately interested in this story as soon as I read the reasons why Sesshoumaru wanted Kagome for himself. Such great ideas, that made more sense than a typical Sess/Kag story. Reading how Kagome's abilities were balanced was also something that piqued my interest a lot more. So overall, this is a great read! I just have to take it in smaller doses. Thanks for a wonderful work.
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Reviewed By: Blue_silver_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, wow, wow, so is Kagome finally going to meet up with Sesshoumaru without the potion? is the gang finally going to know what's happening? is Inuyasha gonna get the beating he deserves for being such an idiot? I can't wait to find out! so keep up the great work and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: MysticAngelDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 05:37 CST
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*poke* I've been following this story for quite some time. Very well written and a very original story. Just thought I'd send a friendly *poke* to make sure youre still alive. ^^ Would hate to see this story unfinished.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 14:14 CST
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Grrrr... why havnt you updated?!!!! this story is awsome you cant leave it like that!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, ive been following your story forever whats with the no updates???? It's driving me crazy come on now. Its a great, awesome story update before you kill me!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is super kawaii! I can't believe you stopped it right there I mean I could kill you for it. But to business you just have to post the next part. For me :) I will be very happy. I just can't wait to find out what happens when Inubaka finds Fluffy and his dark side in love with Kagome. Ohhhh the suspense. You know for some reason this is wrong. But it feels so right!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 00:03 CDT
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Oh why do you not update?! I am begging you! I check every chance I get, and altough that may seem a bit obsessive... Well, it IS! However, this story has so many wonderful characteristics, minus the fact that you DO seem to go on about certain things, that's ok. Your story is indeed origional, fascinating, and so devilishly hentai. You must continue, destroy whatever curse has been put upon you that would not allow you to continue! Be it writters block or something else, it matters not just so long as it is destroyed and soon!
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Reviewed By: _Inukame On: September 27, 2005 04:11 CDT
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Yey!! You updated!!!!!! This was great, hope you update soooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 18:54 CDT
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you updated!!!!!!! cool! Awww that was so sweet of sess!!!! now kag knows, what next?!!! Will everyone know? Will secrets finally come out? You know I hate you for all the unanwsered questions! J/k!!!! lol but please, seriously, the suspense is KILLING me!! PLZ
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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