| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kalkyla On: February 28, 2003 04:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good...VERY GOOD. i love it, but i couldn't enjoy it much because i cried a lot over it. write more soon |
Reviewed By: Anon On: February 26, 2003 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Don't think about the story so much; just play around with ideas in your head. *shrug* I used to believe in such thing as writer's block, but I realized it was just me inhibiting myself. If you're really enthused about writing,then you will. I guess if the story idea is dying on you then...well, what you had was good. |
Reviewed By: Demeter On: February 26, 2003 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Like it..yes...Love yes...Writers block is evil...take a sledgehammer to it. Anyways. Great story. |
Reviewed By: Sango-chan On: February 26, 2003 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you get back into this.. your style is really appealing. I also love this story and idea. When you get back to it.. i'd be there for sure to read it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jam( to family) Dilan (to frends) On: February 25, 2003 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well like I was saying. that fucking bastard how could he hurt her like that. I hope (in the next chapter) that he's going to get his ass kicked big time . By the way I loved our fic and I hope that you will up date soon.Really soon. |
Reviewed By: Chick On: February 24, 2003 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to hear that you might stop writing this fan fic it was really good!!! |
Reviewed By: helenaiko On: February 23, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic!!! please continue. i am sure you don't want to disappoint your many fans and keep them waiting ^_^. in some twisted way, this is more romantic than most fanfics that i have read... looking forward to reading more! |
Reviewed By: lasingparuparo On: February 21, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you write really well! please hurry and put up the next chapter! i want to see if sess will give up his pride and grovel on his hands and knees to kagome! |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru's mate On: February 21, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a nine because one you make your sentence's a bet to long and only half of it printed on on the paper why can't you make it like how you did on the first chap wat I mean is you can have the chap as long as you like but dont make so we have to move it back and forth and then down jus make it so we jus go down Well that's all I have to say. Oh and if u do want to be Palls then E-mail me at Molokaians655@yahoo.com or Let me know when you update well Jamata De sayonara |
Reviewed By: luv me On: February 15, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my fav. fic that i have seen on inuyasha so i please! write the next chaps asap! Love the story, continue writting! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Write more!!!!! On: February 08, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! When ya gonna write more?? I hope you haven't stopped this story, that would be a shame. :( |
Reviewed By: mai On: February 09, 2003 04:50 CST
Comment/Review:
update soooooooooooooooonn please.. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn On: February 09, 2003 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very impressed by your story. And I know what it means to hit writer's block and I am also a perfectionist when I write stories. I loved the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome and I hope these two people hurting inside can find love and peace with each other. Although I do like Kagome and Inuyasha togehter, Sess/Kagome is my next most favorite pairings. I hope we get to read the next chapter soon! I can't wait. Please hurry! |
Reviewed By: hehe On: February 11, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I hope your writer's block will pass soon! Please!!!! Update soon! I'm dying to know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Kit Wang On: February 12, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey! Kool fic really. I felt sad for Kagome but oh well!! She got the spunk to stand for herelf sometimes! Keep up the good work! Hope to read another! or a next chp or this one! ^__^ |
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