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| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: ...NO! NO NO NO!
Reviewed By: Meltingmel On: May 08, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimpers* No...god...no...just...NO! Don't end it there! For the love of Kami DON'T END IT THERE!!! You can't...*holds back a sob* You need to...*bottom lip quivers* HOW CAN YOU LEAVE AND NOT FINISH THE STORY?!!?!?! Oh dear god, I think I'm going to DIE! I'm SERIOUS. Do you know how goddamn HARD IT IS to find a well-written, great plot Inuyasha story these days?! That have the rating NC-17?! There aren't many of those! You are definitely one of the very few, and one of the rares that pop out with an amazing fanfic. PLEASE dear GOD you can't...just...oh god...I feel like I'm going to die. UPDATE THIS STORY PLEASE! Just...just...please finish it. I don't want to shove this story aside waiting for you to update it and never get to see it again because I forgot it existed. Gah...just...oh man...please...UPDATE OR I'LL EXPLODE! I apologize that this isn't a real review, and instead just a huge jumble of words begging for you to update, and I promise by god I'll be able to give you a real review at some point...but I can't...cause...I'm gonna tear my hair out...waiting for you...to update...this freaking story...GODDAMMIT! *pouts* Don't abandon this great story! You're so close! Just...just...PLEASE FINISH IT! *stubbornly vows that she won't die happy until this story is complete*
| Reviewed By: S1Cherry *too lazy to log in* On: April 14, 2004 01:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Argh! *tries not to strangle the author* i'sbeen forever since you up dated! I like this fic, but ha totally forgotten about it till I got a story alert. it's a pretty good story, I just wish you were able to up date a little more often. please try to up date soon. please? *puppy dog eyes* later
| Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:00 CDT
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Ah, I'm quite glad to see that you have updated this. When the alert came to my mailbox, I recognized the title, but I couldn't quite remember the story until I read chapter eight again. I always enjoyed this fic, one of the handful of AU's I like based on Inuyasha. I like the emotional turmoil that Sesshoumaru is feeling. I can completely understand your need to revise. I always dislike my fics when I look back on them after several months. I think that's normal. You're not fishing for compliments...you're just being honest with yourself, because you know you can do better. I say that, but it's not a crit of your writing. I would have to actually go back and read this from chapter one to have an opinion on that (^_^) And everyone has times when they can't update. Fanfiction is the least important part of a person's life. Now that you've been victimized with my mini-ramble of the day... *grins*
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 22:21 CST
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i like it! =D
| Reviewed By: sessyluvr On: April 02, 2004 15:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting for a long time here! I hope that Sesshomaru realizes what he's done and at comes to Kagome crwling and begging on his knees. (Sounds kind of kinky.) I know I would like that! Anyway, keep updating! Love the story!!!
| Reviewed By: sessyluvr On: April 02, 2004 15:20 CST
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Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting for a long time here! I hope that Sesshomaru realizes what he's done and at comes to Kagome crwling and begging on his knees. (Sounds kind of kinky.) I know I would like that! Anyway, keep updating! Love the story!!!
| Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I've been keeping an eye on this fic for a very long time and I really don't think it's EVER going to be updated again. Maybe the author just decided to drop it. Maybe she has writer's block. I don't know, but she could at least let her fans know so that we wouldn't be wondering. *is irritated* -_- I mean she has 160+ reviews, I don't see a lot of fics with that.
| Title: Update?
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: February 21, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to update?
| Reviewed By: kagobabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:38 CST
Comment/Review:
when are you ever going to update????
| Reviewed By: Wild Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, to write a story means there is a beginning and an end. Not a beginning and a middle. *sniffles* So, maybe you could finish the story, and not just drop it like a bad habit? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! Thank ya, Dria
| Title: inu + kag
Reviewed By: Crazy15 On: January 10, 2004 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your fanfiction! It's so emotional and romantic between Sesshomaru and Kagome. What will happen next! I have to know! Update soon. ^_^
| Reviewed By: dark_angel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic, I hope you update soon :'-(
| Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
bit confusing with the whole adding to chapters thing but good fanfic and i do not beleive its finished is it?
| Reviewed By: Udontknowme On: December 24, 2003 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a GREAT fanfic!!!! U really should continue it or at least let someone that is also really good write it for u!! soooo.............. UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: yoarashi On: December 12, 2003 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE this fic it is one of the best i have every read and ive read ALOT but i cant say whos better you or Striking Falcon hers are my fav but i cant chose anymore this fic is blowing my mind cant wait for next update and im sure there are more ppl who cant wait this fic it one of the greatest out there
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