| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kittycat78 On: October 17, 2004 00:06 CDT
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chapter ten is missing so i thought you'd like to know and i hope you repost it because i really like your story.
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Title: congrats
Reviewed By: Wild Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took awhile to update and it might be a bit of a let down, but the product turned out great. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Aiko-chan On: September 04, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been told saying "update soon" is less than encouraging. But what can I say, I read your fic in about an hour, and it left me craving more. So DO update soon! ^^ It was enthralling, and pulled me in with an interest that won't subside. You'll be hearing more from me. Sincerely, *Aiko-chan
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Reviewed By: k On: August 16, 2004 09:07 CDT
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppdaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 11:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are you gungot put more chapter to this story. i hpoe you do.
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Title: Uh
Reviewed By: CrescentsMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it I really did. But what the heck happened. Ok, yea, they're thinking now... but chapter 9 to chapter 11? at first I thought maybe you hid chapter 10 or just working on it. Oh well... looking forward to the update!
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Reviewed By: ebban On: August 06, 2004 02:49 CDT
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i dont understand. You go from chapter 9 to chapter 11. Is chapter 10 the wrap up? I'm really confused. Please say you are going to finish this fic. I have really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: rachelw@cyberback.com On: August 06, 2004 02:48 CDT
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i dont understand. You go from chapter 9 to chapter 11. Is chapter 10 the wrap up? I'm really confused. Please say you are going to finish this fic. I have really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: hrc [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you have to update soon please im begging you this story is ssssoooooo good and just not fair so please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God you know if i didnt love sesshy so uch i would like hate him becuase of the way you made him in this fic but hey i cant so anyway update soon ok this is a really good fic
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Reviewed By: angl4u2luv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 20:25 CDT
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UPDATE SOON! PLEZ So far the story is good so keep up the good work again UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ( THIS CAN GO ON 4EVER) UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Title: HUH!!??
Reviewed By: namichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 01:13 CDT
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HUH? what happened im soo confused. She was on her way to dinner with Hojo in chapter 9 and then there was no chapter 10 and chapter 11 was full of cutted parts, which i think should stay cutted. I agree with you butchering Kagome's character, and it was horrible that she was stupid enough to sleep with Kouga. BUT i LOVE your story nonetheless. PLEASE update and fix the thing with the chapters.
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
what meltingmel said it is soooo hard to fine a good fic these days.....the last update was in april and now its july!!! do you know how fusterateing it is to fined a fic this good and never see it get updated!? and when it dose get updated its been soooo long that you forget that it even exsist!!! I realy hate when that hapens......this is a wonder full fic and I hope that you update A.S.A.P!!!!! it would be awfull...just awfull to see a fic this well wrriten and with such a great plot to go unfinished......just awfull.....please update soon *puppy dog eyes* I realy would be disapointed if you dont so please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: FallenHopes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story but I have one question what happen to chapter 10 its not posted right now and 11 is I find that rather confusing and I would really like to know what happened in chapter 10 please updat this story again soon and if you could please reload chapter 10. From a fan, FallenHopes.
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Title: i don't know
Reviewed By: whyme On: June 20, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but I guess I don't really relate to Kagome's character. But please update cause I'm really curious, and lets be serious, you're good.
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