| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kiyone On: November 23, 2002 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic.. Awesomely written. I like to read these kinda fics but only if they're well written, or it's just boring. Please come out with new chapters ASAP! I'm DYING to know what happens :3 |
Reviewed By: yume_no_kanari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty interesting. But the rating doesn't make much sense to me as of yet.... oh well |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i thought hojo was her steady bf? no?? my mistake...ummm...i hope kag doesn't get back with inu..if he was a fool for leaving her in the first place, it's his lost and he's been sullied by the piece of crap kiykou..(can you tell i don't like her) hehe, well great fic! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 15:37 CST
Comment/Review:
*blinks* You updated ALL the chapters??? *finally knows how it feels* Well, I'll review later ... AFTER I finish reading them all!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Catleya On: November 22, 2002 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK...so it seems that I was wrong, my review was there...and what's more, you had written a new chapter (4) that first I couldn't see...so I'm NOT the queen of informatic, we all know that...anyway, that new chapter is as great as the others! opens lots of possible "doors" (Inu Kag?? but eventhough I don't usually love Kag/Sesh, that fic quite had me change my mind!)...
so please, please, update soon (ok, you did it today...but one can still dream, ne?) |
Reviewed By: catleya On: November 22, 2002 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! I don't understand very well how mediaminer works, as I had made a review which has disapeared... anyway, that's great. caracters are OOC, but the dialogues are just so funny and the hot scenes are just hot and I love the plot so I hope you will update SOOOOONNNNN (please, ne?) |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only giving you a low Spelling/Grammar rating because of "maths" and a chunk of run-on sentences, BUT ...
I just like to say, don't worry about the pressure. I mean, I know what it's like to want to continue writing a fic that others tell you is GREAT and you're just not sure about. And it's HARD to continue fics with pressure like that!!
Oh, this chapter seemed to go fast (too fast). So ... I guess if I compared it to "Salads and Parties" (that was a nice LONG chapter) then you could call this new one "short." The other chapters were about this length, so ... *shrugs* it doesn't really matter too much.
Can't wait for the next chapter and (hopefully) some S/K (or even I/K?) action!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhh...i love this story! chap 4 sound good to me! hehe, inu/kag, sess/kag...muwhahahah...love em both! lemon...hehehehe |
Reviewed By: Momo-chan On: November 21, 2002 11:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Oi! It's great! I loved it! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Eikos Butterfly On: November 21, 2002 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. the only thing that irks me is Inuyasha and kikyo. I kinda feel sorry for Kagome that she still likes Inuyasha. Well, at least it looks like she's changing her feelings for the two brothers. cant wait to see how you have kagome winning this little bet, since Sesshoumaru knows, and her falling in love with him(or at least so it seems so far). |
Reviewed By: saki-decarbet On: November 20, 2002 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I been reading fanfics but not reviewing..... so I guess yours made me have to start. This is wicked but I love it. ^__^ Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! A really original story too! I want to read more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm SO glad that I decided to read this fic (I've never read a Sesshoumaru/Kagome sort of pairing before;not that they're a couple, but you know what I mean). My favorite chapter so far ... Chapter2: Salads and Parties!! ;)
Hm, so she and Inu had a relationship before ... but she still claims to not be over him yet. Interesting ... honestly, when I started reading this fic I was wondering if I/K would end up getting together. But now . . . I think the S/K is QUITE the tease. *smirks* Write more of this!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: catleya On: November 20, 2002 06:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! great, really great. Well, totally OOC, not too mention the fact that it is definitly american (I don't thing japonese have parties that way, or even cars ...)but the plot is funny, hot scenes are really hot, I like the dialogues...and I can't wait to see how Sesh will react!!
so please, go on, update soon!! (and tell me when you do, onegai? patricia-oz@caramail.com) |
Reviewed By: jessica chang On: November 20, 2002 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh !!that is so cute but where is all the pretty hentai scenes to make my mouth water?let me know when you get out a new chapter if you can changjessica2x5@yahoo.com thanks,jessica chang "stupid people shouldn't breed"Chang Wufei |
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