| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Title: WHEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!! PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: icy On: September 12, 2003 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
this fanfic of yours is 100% the best, so pleeeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeeeeee please please please please finish it soon!!!! i'm checking to see if you have updated everyday!!!! oh what is taking you so long!?!?!?!?! if you are not going to updated anymore just say so!!!!i am tired of checking everyday!!! |
Reviewed By: Karasu On: August 22, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gonna finish this story anytime this century. I've been checking once a week... I like it... |
Reviewed By: ioke On: July 31, 2003 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic!! its totally awesome!! i hope that you update sooner!! i cant wait to read your next chapter!!oh by the way... can you send me an email at chipahoy702@yahoo.com when your new chapter is out?! |
Reviewed By: GoddessNagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic...please finshen it...because i would like to see what happens... |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great fic...this is the first time I've read it, so I have no idea how it went before the revisions ^^ You have a very nice writing style! |
Reviewed By: rox On: July 28, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really like this fic, please continue to update soon, i love the personalities and everything |
Reviewed By: The Lecturess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update very very very very very very very very soon! Pretty please? |
Reviewed By: DarkKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH,I DONT KNO IF I HAVE REVEIWED THIS BEFORE BUT WELL WHO CARES!AHHH I LOVE THIS FIC PLZPLZPLZPLZ WRITE MORE.hehe i was alil excited there |
Reviewed By: AJ On: July 24, 2003 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome!! I can't wait to read the rest of it. Can you please email me @ Shyness_35@msn.com when you update?????? Please ^__^ Thanx |
Reviewed By: Steph On: July 24, 2003 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic, cant wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Raine On: July 24, 2003 00:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
we are our own worst critique..but i think this is a very good story..really good. **grin** **likes it alot** so update soon will ya? and that "lemon" wasn't bad. (ooh...ice..sheesh) |
Reviewed By: sesshyangel On: July 22, 2003 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
that's not enough to make up for it all! sure it was nice of him to watch over her as she made her way home, but if he wasn't such a jerk then she wouldn't be walk home [at all. hehe] |
Reviewed By: Charlotte cry On: July 22, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that is the truly the best fic I have ever read. On a technical note, sometimes you almost use to many words to describe a simple thing, but emotionally this is the best I have ever read. I felt just how Kagome does, I felt her tiredness of the bet, I started crying when Sessho kicked her out and I felt her hurt and the despair when she held the razor. I'm not sure if it is the writing or the subject matter, or thefact that it is 1 in the morning, but emtionally your fic is very advanced. It draws emotions out of the reader and forces them to sympathize with Kagome. It is so life-like, when she held the razor, in away I wanted to stop reading the fic, to stop the emotions, just as Kagome wanted to stop the pain, but she pulled through and that pulled me along with the fic to see if she could heal. This is absolutely superb! Even the lemons seem more lifelike then regular lemons. They're weren't exploding stars and they didn't orgasm at the same time, like in almost all other lemons. Even the little thing with Kouga made the fic better. I doubt anyone wanted her to do that, but that is how life goes. It made the story and kagome that much more real.As I said before, I have never read a better fic, or at least never one so real. Please try and continue. |
Reviewed By: ladyfluffy2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh you better tell me that kagome is going to get back at him even if i love sessy he was a dick head to her then i want them to get together okay but other that the story is fantacte i would like to hurry and have to next chapters pppppplllllleeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeee.
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