| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Umi On: February 14, 2003 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adored this fic! I've never been a fan of Sess/Kag , but after reading this, I have to say maaaaybe it doesn't have to always be Inu/Kag {altho they're still awfully cute together! ^_^} and i always love it when someone can make a contemperary story work! GREAT JOB!! =D |
Reviewed By: hershey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOO GOOD!! PLEASE write more SOON!! I BEG YOU!!! i'm REALLY hoping for some Ik/K action. (ALOT actually!) |
Reviewed By: chubbies [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 04:29 CST
Comment/Review:
pleease you really have to update. this is one of the first kag/sess stories i've read, and probably the one that got me stuck on that couple. I realllly wanna know what happens, so pleeeease update soon! |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fan fic, but I think you need to do what you need to do. Take care of yourself first, and everything else will fall into place. Take care!
~Eri |
Reviewed By: kistune princess On: January 23, 2003 22:34 CST
Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee update im dying to see wat happens |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: January 21, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story and I like all the drama but why does Kagome have to be nuts...Most People don't Argue with there Selvs like that |
Reviewed By: Soccer05 On: January 18, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very well written story. I really liked it and wished you would put up the other chapters soon. I hope that they will be as good as the first ones that are up. |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is........................
more, more, more ,more, more, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you
BYE;p
obssesivefangirl sgining off!!
PeAcE BaBy yeah;}
i have so many PrObLeMs O.o O.O o.O |
Reviewed By: Laihiriel On: January 15, 2003 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Ello, MiniMorr!
I am really enjoying your fic so far. While the characters are OOC, it fits with your writing style. The actual style is very well done; it grabs the readers and makes them want to know more. I gave you a 7 for spelling and grammar because there were numerous typos and either fragmented or run-on sentences. Though not found as fequently, there were also a coupla awkward sentences or misused verbs, etc. It is a very creative fic, with just enough lightheartedness to balance the dark. I really love what you have done with Kagome; she makes a very good tortured, lonely soul. I hope that she and Sesshomaru hook up in the end because both of them have such intense emotions. I usually don't go for the Sess/Kag stuff, but your worked. UPDATE!! I NEED CLOSURE, DAMMIT!!! Lady Laihiriel out ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hekate On: January 15, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Absolutely love it, I think the way you interpret the Sess/Kag relationship is very nice. To tell you the truth, I love all your fics. I think you should keep going, just take your time and don't over work yourself...
No suggestions just keep writing the way you do!! |
Reviewed By: kistune princess On: January 14, 2003 21:43 CST
Comment/Review:
i like this story it's really geeting intersting pleeeaaaaassee update
p.s u pock the best pairing sessh/kag perfect |
Reviewed By: chubbies [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 05:09 CST
Comment/Review:
i loove how you made sessho in this fic, i jus love sess/kag stories ^-^ Please, please, please finish this story!! |
Reviewed By: totalspazmo On: January 03, 2003 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a wildly absorbing fic. Your Kagome is way OOC, but that's cool because the Kagome you've created is really interesting. I can forgive you anything since you give great Sesshoumaru (but I haven't had to as you're coming up with some great stuff!).
Your character/plot development is good, and this is one of the few stores I've read where the lack of updates is driving me insane. Please. If you have the tiniest shred of compassion in your soul, please finish this! |
Reviewed By: Melissa On: January 02, 2003 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!! Couldn't tell that you had writer bloack when you wrote that..it was fantastic please continue soon..haha I guess I better get to bed now! night night! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: MidniteSugar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 05:40 CST
Comment/Review:
oH!!!! this is soooooo good!!!!!where the rest?!?! I need the rest!!! I've been here since 7 pm reading this it's now 3:46am *yes yes I'ma slow reader!!!* but WOW GoOd JoB!!!! I loVe it!!!! keep up the gReAt work :) |
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