| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only giving you a low Spelling/Grammar rating because of "maths" and a chunk of run-on sentences, BUT ...
I just like to say, don't worry about the pressure. I mean, I know what it's like to want to continue writing a fic that others tell you is GREAT and you're just not sure about. And it's HARD to continue fics with pressure like that!!
Oh, this chapter seemed to go fast (too fast). So ... I guess if I compared it to "Salads and Parties" (that was a nice LONG chapter) then you could call this new one "short." The other chapters were about this length, so ... *shrugs* it doesn't really matter too much.
Can't wait for the next chapter and (hopefully) some S/K (or even I/K?) action!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhh...i love this story! chap 4 sound good to me! hehe, inu/kag, sess/kag...muwhahahah...love em both! lemon...hehehehe |
Reviewed By: Momo-chan On: November 21, 2002 11:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Oi! It's great! I loved it! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Eikos Butterfly On: November 21, 2002 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. the only thing that irks me is Inuyasha and kikyo. I kinda feel sorry for Kagome that she still likes Inuyasha. Well, at least it looks like she's changing her feelings for the two brothers. cant wait to see how you have kagome winning this little bet, since Sesshoumaru knows, and her falling in love with him(or at least so it seems so far). |
Reviewed By: saki-decarbet On: November 20, 2002 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I been reading fanfics but not reviewing..... so I guess yours made me have to start. This is wicked but I love it. ^__^ Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! A really original story too! I want to read more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm SO glad that I decided to read this fic (I've never read a Sesshoumaru/Kagome sort of pairing before;not that they're a couple, but you know what I mean). My favorite chapter so far ... Chapter2: Salads and Parties!! ;)
Hm, so she and Inu had a relationship before ... but she still claims to not be over him yet. Interesting ... honestly, when I started reading this fic I was wondering if I/K would end up getting together. But now . . . I think the S/K is QUITE the tease. *smirks* Write more of this!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: catleya On: November 20, 2002 06:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! great, really great. Well, totally OOC, not too mention the fact that it is definitly american (I don't thing japonese have parties that way, or even cars ...)but the plot is funny, hot scenes are really hot, I like the dialogues...and I can't wait to see how Sesh will react!!
so please, go on, update soon!! (and tell me when you do, onegai? patricia-oz@caramail.com) |
Reviewed By: jessica chang On: November 20, 2002 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh !!that is so cute but where is all the pretty hentai scenes to make my mouth water?let me know when you get out a new chapter if you can changjessica2x5@yahoo.com thanks,jessica chang "stupid people shouldn't breed"Chang Wufei |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 21:31 CST
Comment/Review:
*drools* you need to write more! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
OOO... wicked. Very nice. Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: snoopy On: December 18, 2002 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must seem presst but manz i, so freakin' over the next chapter if i'm gettin' on your nerves then my bad'! sorry |
Reviewed By: karlita On: December 04, 2002 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read this fic 12 times no lie! i'm waiting for the next chapter people!!! it's not even funny! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh more! Please write more!! This is really good so far! |
Reviewed By: öpeggyö On: January 01, 2003 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow :o) I love your fanfiction.... one of the best Sess/Kag fanfiction i´d ever read... I hope you will write more very soon :o) |
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