| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ugggggggg......she did it with kouga?? yuck yuck!! lol well still wonderful but yuck! and sess was sorry...how sweet! well eagerly awaiting next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Casey On: November 27, 2002 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to start of and say that I love the story, but it seems like there is a new chapter out everday and your always up-dating. Ya gotta rest sometimes, eh? Anyway, I don't really pay attention on things like spelling errors so I can't say much about that, but there is one thing thats slightly annoying. I have to scroll down and to the side when I read this fic (it might just be my computer, but...) so if there is anything you could do about that it would be nice, but it's not absoulutly nessesary. The story of the fic is great. I always have had a special place in my heart *coff coff coff* for Sesshou-maru, so I'm happy to read a fic that does him justice. I kinda like the way it's modernized. Something I don't understand though is if they are in high school or possibly in collage. 'Cause they would be a tad old if they are in high school... Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that your fic is really great and I hope to read the next chapters soon (but don't die trying to get them all out so fast ^^''') |
Reviewed By: Iria On: November 27, 2002 16:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I meant the entire story is completed. I love Sess/Kag pairings! Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Iria On: November 27, 2002 16:24 CST
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Ugh, forget updating and revising until you've put out the whole chapter! I can't wait for the next one... |
Reviewed By: catleya On: November 27, 2002 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for letting me know you had updated it! I check at least once a day, but it seems I had missed it anyway...
well, that was just so good. I love the three last chapters -except the part of Kag sleeping with Kouga ...hurk! poor girl! just going away with him and finding a way to get him lost could have been enough, maybe? -
I didn't see much spelling mystakes, except in the last chapter, but not so much anyway, so that's OK (...anyway english is not my native language...so my opinion migth not be worth much on that matter...). and I like the way you write giving the inner thoughs...that's great. you've definitly made me a Kag/Sesh supporter - just for this fic, usually I prefer Kag/Inu !! - eventhough he did act like a bastard. that part with the razor was scary!!
but I like the Ice king attitude...and witty dialogues! and I also like Kykio caracter. for once, she's not shown as a bitch, and that's great! she deserves a bit of happiness sometimes, ne?
so that's just such a good fic...hope you will update soon!! please, ne? |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: December 01, 2002 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story kicks ass! I used to be an exclusive fan of the Inu-Yasha/Kagome but you've converted me! Now I love both of the pairings! |
Reviewed By: errmmm me myself and I....? On: November 26, 2002 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i looooove this fic it isss sooooooooo good! im liking the whole sess/kag thing goin on but woweez im a reely huge fan of inu/kag....i know so is like practically everyone but still.... sess was such an asshole! and inuyasha has been there for her.... and kikyo just seems a little ditzy if you ask me.... one again i looove this fic and ill love it even if you do stick with thw whole sess/kag thing.... |
Reviewed By: WildfireWing [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful! You really must write more soon! I am really enjoying this story; I have never read another like it before. |
Reviewed By: Jessica Chang On: November 25, 2002 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the rest ?i need the rest of the yummy fic must have more yummy fic
i feel like ripping out shesso's intestains and strangleing him...ok enough morbid stuff
seriously i need the rest please?????????can you rite me hen you update?
changjessica2x5@yahoo.com
ja ne ,
chang
"Stupid people shouldn't breed" Chang Fei |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well...every good relationship has it's ups and downs right? i'm talking about kag and sesshoumaru, i would love to see sessho grovel to kag! god wouldn't that be a sight? lol anyways, looking foward to the next chapter! ciao! ~.^ |
Reviewed By: lullai On: November 24, 2002 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv the story...lots of fluffiness, and i hope inu and kag get back together! awww...kagome lost the bet...anyways, update soon pretty please? |
Reviewed By: Moonbaby On: November 24, 2002 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic... please hurry and write the next chapter!! I can't wait!! |
Reviewed By: shellagh22 On: November 24, 2002 02:46 CST
Comment/Review:
it's really good!! it made me laugh and very curious on how it will end. keep up the good work! :p |
Reviewed By: Kiyone On: November 23, 2002 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
XD I read it again, and I'm even more eager for you to finish it ^^;; I especially like the kitchen scene and the dream sequence... x) Hehe. I'm innocent, really!! Okay maybe not. But this really is easily one of the best fics I've read, and although I prefer the pairing of Kagome and Inuyasha, I love love love this. x3 |
Reviewed By: catleya On: November 23, 2002 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! here again...I was so happy to see that you update so fast! and its still so great...please, keep on like this! by the way, I like the caracter you gave to Kag, so tough on the exterior and so vulnerable in the inside...and I love hot scene that are romantic!! so thats great!! see you soon I hope! |
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