| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:32 CDT
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I hope you enjoy making grown people cry ...
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:12 CDT
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OK i'm sorry for my out burst yesterday. but i was on the edge of my seat. and you just ended it. i was so mad. and now after rereading it i have one thing to say; WHY IN THE SEVEN BOWELS OF HELL WON'T THAT BITCH DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????? AND IF YOU KILL INU YOU ARE A VERY SICK PERSON. and i am really sorry about yesterday's outburst. loves and apologies ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 16:58 CDT
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wow, awesome chappie. is inu gonna die? pwease no, i have read enough of that kind of story to know that... it's fucking SAD! oh yeah, great writting skills, keep it up. lemons aside, story's great.
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 15:26 CDT
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OMG! I feel like laughing and crying at the same time! I just want to laugh because Kagome's okay! And I want to cry because i'm so relieved! That was an awesome chap! You know I knew that wasn't her somehow but I still couldn't help feeling like crying the chap before this one! I loved this chap! Please don't let Inuyasha be dead! We just found out Kagome didn't die! You can't let him die! That would be sooooooo sad! I was just thinking about if he died and Kagome told the kids, Kyo had just seen his dad that morning and it would be like now he's dead! That would be so sad! Please don't make it like that! I wouldn't be able to stand it! Thinking about it makes me want to cry! sniffle. Excuse me for a second. turns around and starts bawling. (Kiotsu, Inu and Kag's son in a story I made up comes into view.) Kiotsu: I'm sorry but she might be like this for a while so she can't write anymore but she just wanted me to tell you that she loves the chap! Oh! She also said Update soon! Okay now! Bye!
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Reviewed By: kb On: April 25, 2006 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is killing me! Your writing flows very nicely though the character of Leiko...well, she's just too...original a character. If she's that tough I wonder why Sesshoumaru has not kept her on the tap before and warn Inuyasha. And besides, she seems a little...psychotic. Well, write more soon! And Inuyasha! Inuyasha, you can't die and leave me!
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Title: UNDERWATER963
Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 09:25 CDT
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great chapter. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! He can't die! then there wouldn't even be a story!!! I hate cliffies (but not the authors who make them), but I must say that this story is going on well... sorry if I just left a review just now... I've been reading since 'Just a Break' was still a oneshot... but sadly, my computer crashed and I had no internet access for months... that along with school work... nice to know that you're continuing it... keep up the good work!! --miko_hanyou_gurl--
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Reviewed By: PrincessMelissa83 (nsi) On: April 25, 2006 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Poor Inu-kun! Kagome needs to purify Leiko's butt into dust. Update soon!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just awesome! The fight scene was great and how InuYasha reacted to what he thought was his mate...whew...oh yea, I could just see him doing something like that, too. Man what a mind blower. Then ya hafta throw in a cliffy? A CLIFFY for Kami's sake! Oh that's just wrong. Evil, evil authors, and their evil, evil cliffy's, dammit, lol. As for your paper you need to hand in? Heh, just change a few names, that should do just fine. Oh yea, that'll work. Lol. Great chapter, excellent story. Update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story,this chapter just"ROCKS". Cliffhangers just got to love them...Please,Please,Please update soon..(yes I'am begging)
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 23:16 CDT
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Damn you and those fucking cliffies!!!!!Better fucking kill the person who said it was alright to have cliffies. They are evil. And i think people who use them are evil. Update or i'll do something very crazy. Muhahahhahahahaha. Ok i'm begging you please update. Pretty please? pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please? Ok it's really sad when i beg. So, i am begging stop it with the damn cliffes. Oh and i don't think you shoudle "wedge a lemon" in. I think you should make lemonade. thanks hun. Much loves ~Cricket42 (P.S. PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPlllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:44 CDT
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GAH!! cliffie! no! update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: Youkerie On: April 14, 2006 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
> > update< aka ^^ good job on your fic so far- would be better tho- if you updated n.n and quickly ^.^ thx
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Title: AHHHH!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan On: April 13, 2006 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap!! Please please please please don't let that be the real Kagome! Leiko, damn you to hell!! I love this fic, but please don't let that be the real Kagome! Inuyasha would be heart broken! Please update sooN! I love this fic!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: marzie On: April 13, 2006 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing! I CANT BELIEVE U LEFT US HANGING LIKE THAT! put up a new chapter please please please! i gotta know what happend that cant be the real kagome please update soon!
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