| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Title: let's get this going!!!!
Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
while it's cool that you took time to re-edit your work (which wasn't even necessary by the way!!) ...lets get to the new stuff!! i've been checking on this story forever! HOW long has it been? you had such a good run! i think you updated almost every week for the most part...but now :( i haven't seen anything new for a while!! update PWEASE? *big inu puppy dog eyes*
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Title: : }
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! me likey. keep up the great work. can't wait for update.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You can do some amazing things with certain citrus fruits, whew! Love your evil OC as well. Should be interesting as to where you take this. Excellent story. Loved it from the get go. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Kikyophobia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:02 CST
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It's very good. However, there is something that I just have to point out because I'm a perfectionist. You aren't starting new paragraphs when you should be. Everytime a different character speaks, or does any kind of action you need a new paragraph. I'll give you an example. You said in this last chapter here ""I love you." He whispered quietly. Kagome eyed him warily before answering..." After "quietly", you need a new paragraph because a different character is doing something. Also, after "I love you", you need a comma after "you" and before the quotation mark. I'm sure you already know that because you're talented, but I was just pointing it out. Ok, that's my two cents. It's still a great story!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Bitch needs to back off of Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! pwease continue, i wanna kno what's gonna happen next. I completely forgot about this story. I did read the first few chapy, n then it was a long time bfore you update, so i jus forgot. Srry!! But i remember is n loved it even more. I did put you as my fav from the time i started reading this, so I stay tru when i say i love it Great job!......oh yeah, um....UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: March 07, 2006 01:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally hot in the woods you need to write scenes like that more often in the next chappy < she's gonna do some crazy magic crap and make inu love her isnt she?
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aggh! if i were him shed be dead allready! stupid bitch. anyways i loved this chapter please update soon!
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Title: just a break
Reviewed By: tearsss On: March 05, 2006 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update update update update!!! update update update update update update!!! update update update update update update!!! update update update update update update!!! XD
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Reviewed By: frostyshake(nsi) On: March 02, 2006 01:33 CST
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Nooooo!!! I really jope that want to be usurper gets what's coming to her! Are Shippo, Kaede, Kouga, Seshomaru and Ron going to make an appearance? And what happened to Kirara?
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Reviewed By: ximaginationx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dsfkj;flajkdfhalksdjahs!!! LOL i dunno how else to put it in words! BAH to the demon lady! BAHH!! LOL! update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Lady moon On: February 28, 2006 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read more, so please update as soon as possible!!!!!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 27, 2006 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not that much of an OC fan either, but i trust you'll make something good of it ^^ it would be interesting to see some sangoxmiroku
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. the women who wants inu is in the next chapter right? guess ill just have to wait to find out. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this family-fun filled chapter. It was so cute and fun. I liked it a lot. Taiki is just too funny cus he takes after his daddy. And the girls are so smart. LOL. That new evil does indeed sound scary. I can't wait to read more. This story is great. I love it. Good job!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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