| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: living ember On: February 26, 2006 02:27 CST
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Well you have me completely panicking,, oh don't let Inuyasha fall for some trapp, you'll give me a heart attack! haha
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Title: *cough*Say HUNH?
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um perdon me but what did i just read? I don no think i heard right. Do I smell hints of rowdiness in the next chapter? Someone is about to be let down for a smackdown.Tsk Tsk Tsk naughty naughty you'll get caughty. lol on to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lady moon On: February 19, 2006 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how your developing your story so far, so please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 19:33 CST
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GREAT so far and I see also that it was the full moon I see what you are planning. But the villian might riun the story like others I have seen. But so I think it's great.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 18, 2006 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter ^^ dont get too carried away wit hthe villain though, ive read heaps of fics that are ruined by too much lame tragedy, so good luck with the crazy demon lady !!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 02:10 CST
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That's okay, I love filler chappies, they're always so fun to read, lol. But I love plots too, lol. Anyway, great update I loved this chapter, it was really cool. Well I can't wait for the next chappie, good work!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: oh and...!
Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 20:59 CST
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little Takai (spelling?) ..sorry haha, he's so funny. i loved Kyo's reaction to him kissing Saaya and being kissed! uber cute!
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Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmigod... she's evil isn't she?! what happen's next? what happens next?! >_< who is she??? *gasp* more, more!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, most excellent. A pretty filler? That's OK. I still liked it. Its still part of the story you're telling, right? Loved it how when Kagome's' thought briefly drifted back over their time together from the beginning, and all that had happened. Even I never looked at Kagome being a weakness to Inuyasha. You are most definitely right in that aspect. To me, anyways. You did a wonderful job with it. And ah yes the um, Full Moon...the Full Moon is rather, pretty, isn't it? And am so glad Sango and Miroku are in here as well. Gotta love the innocents a child though,lmao. I was waiting to see when they get to the *WHY* stage. When whatever you say, the child why be like on auto-run, and ask *WHY*. Lmao. I was also wondering when you'd bring in something vile. Should be very interesting. She doesn't seem familiar. An OC perhaps? Either way, it should make for some damn fine reading. Update soon.
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Title: oooo O.o
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 16:11 CST
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ooooooomg///i just read this chapter again....yeah again///and i noticed i didn't notice something///it was a full moon.....=o she's gonna get....pregnant!///correct?
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: February 12, 2006 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. Now that, is hot! So it was a full moon, huh? Looks like Kyo and Saaya are going to have more siblings! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: swt_chocolate692 On: February 12, 2006 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear if inuyasha was mine, i'd just tie him up and he'd have to be my sex slave!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 10, 2006 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing =D possibly my favourite chapter so far! very good, very good ^^ full moon means baby, doesnt it? =P update soon!! i cant wait >=D!
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Title: Hot damn!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was entirely to funny lol.That's me and my fiancee right there. THAt's to crazy. But it was hot though keep adding.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh suffocating from the immense fluffiness! inuyasha makes a great father XD i can just picture him carrying their minature doubles around the forest in the middle of a sunny day or something! the lemons are another thing...they're so wonderfully different! the first was so sweet and just made you tingle all over, then there was the teaser! which i felt totally bad for inu-chan. then the last was so...ROAR. LOL if you know what i mean! cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!
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