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Title: !!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ximaginationx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yayy!!!!!!! This has been made into more than a one-shot! So wow...you were up until five in the morning writing the last chapter?! Think there's gonna be any late nights again?..soon???? GREAT!! Next chapter! And ohmigosh...is there going to be another little Inuyasha and Kagome running around soon??! Ooooo...I thought Inuyasha would know when the full moon came!
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Reviewed By: living ember On: February 06, 2006 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OUTSTANDING!!!!!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was one heck of a chapter, I LOVED it!!! Kagome's grandpa is so funny, I was cracking up. Hates Inu one second then praises him. Talk about humorously fickle. LoL. That was one hot lemon. Jeez... ;-) I loved that too, lol. Great writing, and I can't wait till the next chapter. Your staying up just to give us this amazig chapter is much appreciated. Thank you, lol. ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: ergo On: February 05, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*all hot and bothered* Wow! That was one incredible lemon! I definitely agree with Kagome that Inuyasha needs to go "dominant hanyou" on her more :-) I'm a little surprised that Souta is still finding romance icky though, I mean he has to be at least 15 now right I mean his oldest nephew is like 4 and all. I still think I would like to see the flashback on wedding night...kinda want to see Kaede's take on the couple's love declaration. And, call it an obsession, but I really want to know how the couple manage on Inuyasha's human night without Kagome getting pregnant. I just can't see Inuyasha wanting to stop the incredible sex with his wonderfully sexy mate when the obstacle is something as trivial as the phase of the moon. Hmm. 69? Lots of rubbings, handjobs and oral for both parties? Condoms like I suspected earlier? I dunno. And just to make sure that you don't forget, please please please write more soon! I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: February 05, 2006 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a awesome story. I hope that you keep writing more. Inu/Kag fucked on a day when the moon was full...what is goin to happen next. Maybe another lil inuyasha. hope you update soon.XD
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was certaintly interesting, lol. You do know how to make some really good lemon ade there, ya know that? Heh, its a good thing they dont have a frige in their kitchen, now THAT would interesting, hehehe. And lmao, the bit with her Grandfather. His confusion reminded me alot of Totosai. Great chapter. Cant wait to see what else happens.
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Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 09:10 CST
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i always imagined inuyasha would be so extremly sexy when he's being all dominant...and man i was right. hehe;; great chapter!
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Title: LOL!! ^----^
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: February 01, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was hilarious! Keep up the good work and update! I want to see chapter 4!!!!
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Reviewed By: frostyshake(nsi) On: January 31, 2006 21:50 CST
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I loved this as a one-shot and I love it even more as a story! The kids are cute and the love scenes are hot.
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Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 20:37 CST
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I'm so glad I found this fic. It's so delightful! I love the humor, and the lemony goodness is nice, too. *g* Thanks for sharing!
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Title: This is so cute!
Reviewed By: ergo On: January 29, 2006 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wee! What a chapter--the Inuyasha and squirrel interaction scene was just PRICELESS! It got me thinking though, does that mean our favorite couple cannot have sex on Inuyasha's human night? Shame--human Inuyasha is quite sexy in his own right. I guess Kagome makes Inuyasha wears a condom or something. Variety pack! Ribbed, studded, spiked and glow in the dark condoms! Lol. That could be quite fun as well as pregnancy preventing. Glad to hear the brothers are on good term. Does Inuyasha has any other job in the feudal era other than being the village protector? Since he's on good term with Sesshoumaru is he simply a lord living on the rent and tribute of others now? I guess you will touch base on that later on. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, I remember now!!! Just a Break. LoL. Disregard my questioning email I sent just a while ago asking who you were, LoL. I love chapter 3, it was a great update. i thought it was kinda funny. YES!!! You should make thins into a lengthy story. If you don't mind me asking, on average how long is your chapters? I was thinking of writing my very first fic and wasn't sure how long each chap was supposed to be, and I don't want then to be too short. Anyway great chapter update. And how about a flashback to the actual proposal, or to the wedding? Just some ideas. Okay, I can't wait for the next update and chapter four, great writing!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad you took this past a one shot as well. And, LMAO,I can relate all too well with what Kagome was going through with her son and the waist length hair. Brings back many fond memories. Love the flashbacks,too. How else can things get explained. Flashback I liked best was when InuYasha tried to talk to his mate about pups,lol. But ROFLMFAO with the bit with the squirrel. But it was a damned good thing he didnt lose that battle,lmao. Great story. Update when you can.
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Title: ooooo
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was hopeing you would make it longer....and you did! yesh! you don't kno how many times i read just the first chapter when it came out...heh. btw i loved the squirel part made me laugh
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 29, 2006 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww great chapter! =D i still feel for the squirrel though =P i dunno about flashbacks, im enjoying the present parts of the story moreso, but put in whatever mushy/'experimental'(*wink*) moments at your will =P
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