| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: lemonhead On: January 28, 2006 01:49 CST
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I think I felt a cry about to come on me when poor Inuyasha didn't get his way.
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Reviewed By: living ember On: January 27, 2006 23:54 CST
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Yes god Yes!!! I love your story. Kuddos to the talented author.
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Reviewed By: yess!!!!!! On: January 27, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel SO bad for poor inu-kun!! it's so incredibly cute and fluffy and so incredibly hentai! like one of the other reviewers said, i LOVE the bite you add to it! oh and the way everything is described...talk about mental images! i could literally see the sweat dripping from inuyasha when kagome 'took matters into her own hands', haha!! and i have to comment on this, your grammar and spelling? wickedly superb!! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: kb On: January 27, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gasp! You can't leave poor Inu hanging like that! More chapters please. He deserves some lovin', too :)!
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Reviewed By: MoonlightMage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just to cute for words, and I also like the hentai bite you put into it too!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu and Kag forever, man! On: January 26, 2006 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. Fluffines of the Inu/Kag genre is always a favorite of mine. Honestly, this little fic made me go 'SQUEE!' ...'Cuz you know I love the stuff. XD
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this piece the moment I read it. And I keep going back and re-reading it over again. To me, I just liked it, alot If you do decide to take it past a one-shot, I think you'll just great with it.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! You updated. I hope this means your making this story into more than a one-shot. That's great! I loved chapter 2, I thought it was funny when they kept getting interrupted, lol. I can't wait for chapter 3 I know it'll be awesome!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 26, 2006 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO XD yay for update! it was awesome! =D i cant wait for the next chapter, i hope inu-chan doesnt murder kyo XD
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 02:54 CST
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this is just perfect...porr Inu
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Reviewed By: Ladyofthewest4eva(logedoff) On: January 25, 2006 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it Love it, Love it! Please keep going!
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Reviewed By: ---- On: January 24, 2006 07:32 CST
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It would be lovely to contuine this story...you already paved the way...for example, Sango and Miroku's "break" or you can go on another angle all together with a new story of inuyasha's son and that girl....
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 22, 2006 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah definately ^^ *thumbs up*
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Title: do you even have to ask?
Reviewed By: ergo On: January 22, 2006 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, this story is so wonderful I couldn't wait to see the sequel. So please heed this request and write more Inuyasha/Kagome goodness for us loyal fans :)! I dunno, maybe the kids actually manage to catch them half way in the act and little flustered Inuyasha and Kagome are forced to explain the birds and the bees? Or maybe you can do a flashback to the wedding night? Or just plain old fun of the couple sneaking about after the kids are asleep to have some intimate moment :) Hee hee. Well yes, you definitely have my vote for more to this. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:49 CST
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Yes!! Make this into more than a one-shot, it's really awesome!!! -TrinityK
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