| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vana On: June 23, 2008 03:05 CDT
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Wowzers... I was clicking through my bookmarks and opened this one, just wondering if you had updated--and go figure! You did! I couldn't remember what had happened at all through most of the story, as it had last been updated sometime in 2006, so I went back and reread the entire fic. Heh... Awesome chapter. That sudden ravage scene deserves sooo much applause and just... O.o... And then the sudden hunting? That's how I imagined Farfarello would always have been. Plus some added amazing intelligence and cooking skills, but the murderer clergy-assasion first. Can't wait to see more! Hope you feel better!
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Reviewed By: Saanrio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 21:37 CDT
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I just found this earlier this week. It's taken me days to read it all, and now I'm anticipating the next chapter. I havce to admit, there were a couple of times where my first reaction to Aya's decisions was a raised brow and a sense of wariness. However, you have (in my mind, at least) supported it with believable character development and interactions that support it. I am very happy with this, and I hope you are well enough to continue it. Having a couple of health issues myself that can get a little yucky (thank god, I have yet to get to the really yucky parts), I understand where you're coming from, and I wish you the best.
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Reviewed By: PpAllen2772 On: May 12, 2008 13:37 CDT
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HURRAY!! at last an update. i have been waiting patiently for the next chapter. and it was worth the wait. who would have ever thought farf incharge of a crime organization. well, i guess you wouldn't call it a crime organization. i guess it would be a small assissnation ring. anyway, i can't wait until the next chapter. i want to see what happens when schuldig tells yohji the truth. but i guess he won't take it too bad but then again who knows. you have to update soon. i just love this story and i'm wondering what happened to crawford. did he disappear on his own or was he truly kidnapped?
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Reviewed By: Darkephoenix nsi On: May 11, 2008 18:44 CDT
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Kinda funny, I'd just finished rereading this yesterday and lo and behold a new chapter. Excellent work as always. Glad to know you're functioning better. We love and miss you.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back! I didn't dare to hope you would return, but am very grateful that you did. This is one of my all time favorite stories, and ending of the previous chapter left me begging for more. Terrific chapter! Much is explained, and better still, reason is given for what is not explained. The characterizations are as true and fierce as before, and the plot as intense. I can't help but feel sorry for Aya as no apology is given (or sought) for the ways in which he has been used, and the affirmation that he is of personal worth is understated (playing in again to his own seemingly poor sense of self-worth) -- but it works beautifully for this story. Of course, just as you have made us feel Farfarello's and Aya's passion for the hunt, you've made us ravenous for more of this story. Thank you so much for the gift of a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: rukia_kishiim [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update alreaddyyyy ;___; I have this problem where I find amazing fics, but they're NEVER finished. Evarrr. *begs on hands and knees*
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Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 22:50 CST
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I'd been wanting to read this for a long time, and I've done little else in my spare time this week. It's really wonderfully consistently bone-rockingly good, this story! Aya and Farfarello is my favorite pairing, and watching them fall in love was so beautiful and so hot. The conflict is beautiful and hot too. Your initial characterization of Aya and his situation with Ken was thrilling - so bleak! So tortured! And as Aya develops (well, some development, some authorial revelation), I keep liking him more. You also have some of that Aya/Yoji romance; Aya/Yoji is also my favorite pairing. Aya's definitely a bit of a slut - yup, love that too! And the "everybody loves Aya" thing - so funny! So true! Which brings me to Chloe. That was a pleasant surprise, and another great sex scene. (I was thinking, "Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!") I am eager, eager, eager to read the next chapter and find out more about what's going on, and see more of Aya and Farfarello interacting, and, it is to be hoped, having more sex!
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 20:38 CST
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FUCK!!! FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUUUUUCK!!!! *races around screaming more profanity* I don't normally curse this much, but MY GOD that's been my reaction the whole fucking time! Either it was intense and with all the suspense and twists my mind just went BOOM!!! or I was discovering the incredible FCUKING HOTNESS of AyaFarf sex! Whaaaa!!!! *runrunrun* Seriously, it has to be fucking unhealthy for me to be so on EDGE for so LONG! *mind resumes explosions*
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: September 20, 2006 23:14 CDT
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i'm glad you didn't make yohji part of the betrayal and i'm interested to hear farf's and schu's explanation as well as how yohji will react... i must say that aya seems a bit promiscuous to me...
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Title: You rock
Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter what happens, you have a way of making if just feel right. I never thought I could visualize the characters and their situations but this is slowly becoming my standard of character behavior. You have the greatest interpretation of Farf that I have ever read. The appearance of Chloe just made my opinion of your greatness turn into proof positive. Plus you made Chloe uke!! I can't giggle enough over that. It may require another Snoopy dance. Now get to work and write up some really hot FarfxAya make-up sex. You are a Queen!!
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Reviewed By: Nekoabyssinian [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 14:11 CDT
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Wow! Another new chapter! Thanks! Love the fact that despite being so angry with Farf, Aya still can't resist his pull. I really hope that they end up together though. Hmm...seems like Farf has deeper feelings for Aya too. Sometimes I wonder why love is so complicated..then I think that things that come easy are not appreciated. Oh well...great work as usual and I hope to see more fabulous writing. :) Take care~
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Reviewed By: IzzyP On: September 18, 2006 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kinda confused. But Chloe makes a great uke at least. ^_^ Thank you for replying to my review, I feel so loved. Seriously.
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Title: Thx You
Reviewed By: fangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive been waiting forever for the update. Please dont drop this fic anytime soon. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 10:33 CDT
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You already know what I think about this chapter, but I'm leaving a review anyway. Because I love you and this story that much. Oooo...I wonder if Aya and Farf will have make-up sex...
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new chapter from you is a lasting joy. Hot, delightful sex, humor as Aya begins correcting Chloe's misinformation, underlying pain and exhaustion, but the promise of being on the right path again. I can't wait for that explanation. I never expected Schuldig to have been involved in planning this (whatever this might be). To find out why Aya got tossed into the mix, but not due to Farfarello, is going to drive me nuts until we find out. I suspect Yohji is going to be very angry indeed. Thank you, thank you for the chapter!
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