| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 23:10 CDT
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oooh. Fascinating turn of events! I look very much forward to the next chapter....
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Reviewed By: ratso. On: September 10, 2006 23:43 CDT
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oi, i lied. When i saw this chapter was shorter than average I completely failed at going to bed. Very very hot.
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Reviewed By: Ratso.... On: September 10, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you never cease to amaze me with the fabulous little descriptive details you manage to fit into your stories. I liked that farf admited to being a bad shot due to depth perception, and the image of him getting out of the shower with his eyepatch on cracked me up. Its late and I'm really tired, but it's gonna be hard to stop reading and go to bed. I will catch up on the other chapters as soon as I can!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 23, 2006 21:31 CDT
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ooohhh! Plot twist and Chloe together, yum! Plus a nice long chapter. Don't you dare drop us here.
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Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:46 CDT
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Yay for updates. I am so glad to see an update. I am doing a happy dance right now. Picture Snoopy. Thats me at the moment. Seriously, I love this story. I will read almost anything WK but I wait for updates to this like a schoolgirl waiting for a call from a boy. You Rock!!
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Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:46 CDT
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Yay for updates. I am so glad to see an update. I am doing a happy dance right now. Picture Snoopy. Thats me at the moment. Seriously, I love this story. I will read almost anything WK but I wait for updates to this like a schoolgirl waiting for a call from a boy. You Rock!!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! Humor, hints of what is going on coupled with genuine caring demonstrated by Farf, and the realistic emotions as Yohji and Schuldig learn of the relationship. (I loved the fact that Schuldig was not conveniently home when Yohji found out, and Schuldig's willingness to help -- but not at the cost of his own relationship). Then, the very unexpected and completely delightful appearance of Chloe. How could he not fall immediately for Aya? Poor, poor Aya. Putting together snippets of information, and understandably perhaps, coming to all the wrong conclusions (or so I dare to assume). I hope he has a moment to reflect on the coinciding of a few weeks when Farf can tell him what is going on, similar schedule for something big happening coming from Omi and Nagi, as well as Crawford (although the latter he might not know); and of course, Farf gave him a mission to dispose of the Ezset visitor, not make truce with him. I especially loved the notion of Farf as being even more committed to "righteous" murder than Aya as it might apply to this scenario. But with (I presume again) the danger of telepaths and therefore the need to closely contain information, lack of sleep, discord, and comments from Schuldig, Aya's newly rediscovered rage could do serious damage. Still, having Aya realize his strength in the face of such pain (from Yohji first, then the thought of so much betrayl) is wonderful. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 16:56 CDT
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da da dum! plot twist!
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Reviewed By: Hyuuga_Kirine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 15:08 CDT
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Oh goodness. I read this fic some time ago, but I've never reviewed until now. This fic is one of the best WK fics in the web. You are one of the few authors of the WK fandom that I praise. As for this chapter, I was hyperventilating when I read the part about Aya noticing the rose stuck in the plaster. Gah. Chloe is one of my fave characters. Before I was thinking that this fic couldn't possible get any better, but now that you've added Chloe, I just died and went to heaven. Please, oh please let Chloe stay for a long time in this fic!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 14:20 CDT
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Ooooo... A twist! I do so love twists! Even if it means that the relationship which has converted me will be in danger. Because it can also mean that the relationship will get even stronger later or something. Besides, conflict makes things oh so yummy.
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Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 08:47 CDT
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Oh my gosh! Chloe! And oh so evil of ye, leaving it right there. Damn but there better be some misinformation going on, because I'd hate to see Aya going after Farf with the kukri in retaliation after all that hotness!
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Reviewed By: IzzyP On: August 21, 2006 06:25 CDT
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Wow that was unexpected. I can't believe that Farfie was lying to Aya. Obviously this will be a huge set back for everyone's relationships. I can't wait til the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: August 04, 2006 11:42 CDT
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i cannot tell a lie -- i skimmed *looks shamefaced* i wanted to keep up with the plot...
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Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 07:37 CDT
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I think my brain just dribbled out of my ears. *fans self* It's almost too damn hot outside live through reading something like this. My gosh, never thought I'd say that about a FxAxF! And it's tickling me pink that the spam filter below this is asking me to type out 'AYAN'. *cackles*
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: August 04, 2006 07:09 CDT
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That was one of the hottest things I've ever read. This is an excellent fic, dear.
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