| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: Andartha_rasri On: January 10, 2006 13:05 CST
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Very, very nice. Intriguing and well-written. Favourite phrase: "Don't work towards it," Yohji said, trying hard to keep from raising his voice, "do it." I can only second that one. And the crack about Aya at Disney was priceless ^_^
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: January 09, 2006 12:09 CST
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wow i really need to read my reviews better that was supposed to be ...why on earth etc...
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 23:56 CST
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Ah, lovely as always, darling. Yes, a bit on the heavy side, but well warranted and wonderfully done.
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"He'll end up stealing a sword from an animatronic pirate and, if he doesn't manage to kill any actual children, at least he'll have fun hacking the heads off the seven dwarves" You're so good. This and other thinks lighten it, no, it's not too serious, it's great. You made me snicker at just the right times to keep it from being too much. Loved Aya's way of shutting them up--and all three Weiss on the floor, the way they go back to being comfortable together. This is another terrific chapter.
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Title: waaah
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 13:39 CST
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who on earth did you end it there??? there's this huge confrontation about to happen and you end it??? schu was remarkably well behaved (for him)....and yay im first! beat that KD
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 17:45 CST
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im with dv...i dont have an aya syndrome or a yohji syndrome or a weiss syndrome, nope, no siree...oh yeah this is a review...hmmm i should make a comment but all i really want to tell u is fab job as usual and hurry up and update...my spam filter reads bzkr (can we say beserker anyone?)
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Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the angst, the mental instability, the confusion: Its all so deliciously displayed. There is nothing better than a good bit of emotional tension to get the melancholy going. I'm so glad you did a view from Aya before Yohji showed himself. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think I may have a new fav story in the WK fandom.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 21:25 CST
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Very nice. Wonderfully angsty and an interesting set up for what I'm sure it to come. Sorry, darlin', no Aya syndrome here. Much more inclined to the other redhead. Where is the Farfling, by the way?
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Reviewed By: KD not signed in On: December 31, 2005 20:49 CST
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Geez. You get me so into Aya, when I'm done reading it takes a bit to recover...I love that. I don't objectify him, me loves my broody bastards. But I think you hit it with Aya Syndrome, and I did keep in mind the theory was filtered through the jealous mind of Schuldig, not exactly trustworthy on the best day...so don't pay any attention to anything bad anybody says, okay? This has been and continues to be terrific.
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 03:56 CST
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Oh Maaaaan. I can't believe I've been chatting with you for weeks and had no idea what an amazing writer you are. It's a good thing I saved this for after Christmas or I wouldn't have gotten anything done because once I started this (despite the fact I started it at 3 am) nothing short of the apocolypse could have gotten me to stop reading. This is one of the best fics I've read in ages. And one of the only ones where I'm completely torn over what outcome I want.... Usually Aya/Yohji trumps any other pairing for me, but you've got me seriously into this Schuldig (this makes my top 2 list of Schuldig fics ever now.) I have absolutely nothing constructive to offer. All I can saw is 'wow.' (followed by /more/....please?)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:15 CST
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Ne, where is my wonderful little Farfling? I know he's not dead or anything. Hopefully he'll be making an appearance soon.
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Reviewed By: Andartha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 06:27 CST
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I wonder who will turn out to be the Sous-Chef...aren't those the cooks that have to chop up all the vegetables and stuff at a restaurant? I'm currently betting on Farf. Love the way you portrayed Aya-chan. Damn, the girl has a spine. Love Schu and Yohji too. The scene where Yohji tried to leave and then came back and found a crying, heart-broken Schu was...wow. Also, the portrayal of France was great!
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Title: Just here for the smut...
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 17:19 CST
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I just came back to read the smut, demmit. I will NOT be hauled into reading it all again... Damn, girl, this is so GOOD!
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 17, 2005 00:25 CST
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finally back to reading...that is i'm officially caught up and i love the newest chapters...although i'm not too sure about the image of Schu drooling down Yohji's neck...and everyone loves Aya? (that's what Yotan's for...although i admit to being a little biased) :)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 18:15 CST
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Umm...what wonderful things haven't I said yet? You truly did an awesome job of presenting the needed information without slowing things down. This chapter is great, and you are so right about Aya Syndrome... Love this!
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