| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: August 03, 2006 20:25 CDT
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ok i'm stepping out of my box (or at least trying to) , and it took me a long time to get the courage to read this chapter (like KD i'm a wuss!) and I'm only doing this for you! And I can't believe you actually have me feeling sorry for Ken (Ken!) but everyone in the story (even Farf squick!) seems to be getting some, and poor Ken's rotting away. Sigh. I don't know why I let you do this to me...
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Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 14:00 CDT
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I've passed over this fic so many times because the title gave me the impression of some sort of driveling AU bit of nonsense. OMG was I ever wrong! I noticed someone gushing over this fic in the commentary for 'Red Shaman' and decided to give this a try. I am so glad I did! Wow, what a great job! Read it all in one marathon run too. I've never pictured Farfello in such a way before, feel almost stunned, but in a good way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 01:11 CDT
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What...what have you done to me?... You've got me thinking of Farfarello as sexually appealing now! Like really REALLY sexually appealing! Oh god. And...I want more. I...I can't help it... Oh. Oh, it's like... Like I want to just say to hell with my OT3! I want Aya to be with Farf! This...has NEVER happened to me. Never. ;_;
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 01, 2006 16:03 CDT
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we know, or we hope we know, and we're all drooling. glad you're back. hope next chapter does not take so long.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 01, 2006 16:03 CDT
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we know, or we hope we know, and we're all drooling. glad you're back. hope next chapter does not take so long.
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Title: Squeeeee!
Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 07:50 CDT
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That's it, I am officially a melted puddle of satisfied goo. Aya/Farf. Hot damn! If it gets the next chapter up quicker I will Fedex your favorite bribe straight to your door. I will burn incense to the creative Goddess. I will fast until...nah, love my food, but you get the point. Loves, loves, loves the story! I have a sudden urge to eat a dinner made by Farf and nibble on him for dessert, Aya for the appetizer and Schu and Yohji for the after dinner drinks. Gah! Gotta go soak my head now. I'm much too worked up.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 00:15 CDT
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Another great chapter. I enjoyed the glimpse into Schu's fraities. Makes him that much more endearing! Glad you got past the writer's block!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 11:16 CDT
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Okay, loved this chapter. Truly. How on earth did you make me like Yohji and Schu together? And, "Hello. My name is Schuldig. Have we met?" LOL!! You really are terrific!
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Title: An update!
Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Short, but very intense. I love vulnerable Schu as much as I love cocky bastard Schu. Farf's dogs crack me up, even though Rotties scare the crap outta me. I saw my first Rott in the movie, "The Omen" I guess it stuck.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: June 04, 2006 18:47 CDT
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okay so i'm late as usual...but i loved as usual! I'm still trying to figure out the names of the dogs though, I would have gotten Romulus and Remus, but Romulus and Darius I don't follow....
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Nadir Rusalki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 08:51 CDT
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Heya! That cake sounds too great, you know. If only there's a way to have those two boys...anyway, I'm Thamyras and I've uploaded the art I made for your fic in my account. Geh, the way you wrote him, I also wanted to kiss Schuldig when he cried. ;_; This chapter is so sweet. Anyway, I hope you're feeling better. Link is: http://fa.mediaminer.org/85/188585.jpg
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Reviewed By: soxy On: June 02, 2006 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's about time you updated (mock glares at you) god I needed my Aya/Yohji/Schu/Farf fix (hmm that just gave me interesting ideas for a foursome... ::shakes head to clear away naughty thoughts::) but anyways great chapter! And the phone call... very ominous but intriging. Well I can't wait for the next chapter hopefully the update will be pretty soon ::clears throat:: (a cold you know) Happy writing! (hmm on a side note I just want to say it sucks that I never get any cool spam filter messages... just had to get that off my chest)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: June 02, 2006 21:14 CDT
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Marvelous as always, darling. Dear gods, the spam code is SQIK.
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Reviewed By: Tlynn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yay, your back! I am so hooked on this story now. I had actually been ignoring it for awhile on AFF because I was thinking "Food and Weise, pass". But now that I know it is more Weise and Schwartz dealing with guilt and depression and angst and how to you move on from a life like they had - it is all "Weise and food - Yummy!" Keep it going. Oh, and I LOVE Yohji's cup! Really why do girls get implants and then wonder why men stare, I don't get it.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 15:43 CDT
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Lovely as always. And at the end, when Yohji tells Schu that he's his favorite person, and Schu gets all teary eyed?... Yeah, I loved that. So much. It was a major "Awwww" moment. I just love a Schu that can be an evil-minded bastard (thinking about turning Yohji into a slave and having hate sex with Aya), but at the drop of a hat, can display how truly vulnerable he can really be. Well done.
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