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| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: Andartha_rasri On: January 27, 2006 05:11 CST
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"..no one can sneak up on him, that he can actually match my speed if he wants or needs to, that he finds it amusing to be stabbed and/or shot but that he can avoid both if he wants to, no matter how small of a space he's in...And, of course, that he doesn't feel any pain." Sounds like the perfect list of required attributes for someone ruling a busy, crowded kitchen with lots of hot or sharp things about. Love this chapter. The game Schu and Farf play and how it slowed down over the years fits will with the way Schwarz in general has developed. Good and consisten description/explanation of PSI powers too. Never mind that now I want to see some Farf/Aya interaction very badly. This is a brilliant, wonderfully written story and I love it. Thank you!
| Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 15:26 CST
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So... I'm hooked. I don't know how I managed to skip over this previously, but yesterday I started reading it and didn't want to stop (though, unfortunately, my reading was constantly interrupted due to classes and the need for sleep). Your take on many of the characters, histories, etc are very interesting. And now that Farf is in the picture...well... Let's just say he's one of my favorite characters (though never thought of in a sexual way for me...just can't with him). I'm very interested to see how your Farf has developed and changed now that he's happily medicated and sane. Oh! And it looks to me almost as if there will be a three-way relationship at some point. If so, yay. If not, then I predict instead there to be much conflict. So, that's also rather yay. Conflict is interesting. And the conflict you've portrayed so far has been very interesting indeed. Even more would be just as delicious, I'm sure. ;)
| Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 23:03 CST
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you did that for spite! you put in an aya ken scene *shudder* oh my eyes my eyes! hmm i see that the chef part of the sous chef finally came in. And i started cracking up at school when i read the part about nagi throwing schu against the wall, and Yohji saying they should have blue paint
| Reviewed By: KD nsi On: January 17, 2006 20:27 CST
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Like the eye of Sauron, huh? This just gets better. I really am going to start nagging you about your original novel. RQ--you're incredible. It drove me crazy, waiting all day to come home and read it.
| Reviewed By: Mockorange7 On: January 17, 2006 19:36 CST
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I wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this fic--I only started reading it this week--I had avoided it earlier because, well, I thought, set in France, about Weiss as chefs ... well, I didn't think it was what it is. But it is dark and delicious, and while I actually think the villains--Aya-chan and Ken--are getting short shrift, I like that their motivations are completely understandable and sympathetic (I feel sorry for them both--Aya-chan's description of Aya creeped me out--and while I had thought you were going for some kind of Aya-Schu-Yohji thing, after reading this latest chapter and being more or less a Ken/Aya OTP girl, I feel even worse that he's going back to that insitution, even if Omi is overlooking everything, and although of course violence in a relationship, fictional or not, is never acceptable, Aya didn't treat Ken well in many ways either, and I'm hoping he gets released soon all undamaged again and you fix everything in the chapters to come!). And now, after all that rambling and reading descrip of food, you've also made me somewhat hungry, so I must be off ... anyway, just a long gushing ramble to tell you how much I have enjoyed the first 8 chapters, and how much I am sure I'll enjoy the rest.
| Reviewed By: walkin_siesta On: January 17, 2006 19:15 CST
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oh wow, i really like this fic. i adore Schu and agrees with 'objectified aya' thing, which i see in a lot of fanfics. seriously, he may be gorgeous as hell, but he's still human (or not ^^;). i feel sorry for ken, and mamoru's a prick XD
| Reviewed By: Andartha_rasri On: January 17, 2006 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... the use of "Feurig" certainly fits Aya, even if his flames are currently dampened somewhat. ^_^ Could use a capital "F" though like "Schuldig" since both are verbs that are used like nouns in this context. The strangled Crawfish sent me into a fit of giggles as did the "I blame Kase" and the bit about hanging with Crawford being as exiting as organizing socks in a drawer.
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 11:27 CST
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Excellent! I can honestly picture Farf working as a chef. He has excellent control of the knives, I'm certain. Heheeh.
| Reviewed By: soxy On: January 15, 2006 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work... I can't wait for more Update Soon Please!
| Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so good! i'm glad you finally updated. brings me great joy. makes me happy you beat up ken the asshole. i still feel bad for aya, but i know that your amazing writing will tell all in due time. hopefully short time because i want to read more, which means you should write faster =^_^= *gives u cookies* amazing story! i sure would like to see aya's paint body on a wall X3
| Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: January 15, 2006 01:27 CST
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hehehe i gotta sneeze now!! how is farfie doin'?? what did he go to school for?? is his name still farfie?? and who woulda thought schu schu would kiss ran's cheek......... thanky for updating!
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so worth the wait...oh, thank you, thank you, every word was wonderful. You keep this up, and I'll be borrowing Aya's katana to get you to work on that original novel!
| Reviewed By: mm-chan On: January 14, 2006 14:41 CST
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*attacks rq with a pitchfork for hurting yohji* Hmm I knew Ken was screwed up in youf fic, but I hadn't realised how much. I'm wavering between feeling sorry for him and wanting to punch him for hurting Yohji. I am also extremely curious as to where the new and hopefully improved Farf will be.
| Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 13:43 CST
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So I'm a bit behind in my reading (just finished the fourth chapter), as I've been rather out of comission internet wise, but I simply had to mention my absolute love of your theory concerning the objectification of Aya. Of course, I might be reading into this far too much, but it struck me as an incredibly clever metaphor for the way Aya's character gets handled in a good chunk of the Weiss fanfiction that exists to date. Of course, the non-academic side of my brain is saying "Well duh, he's just that hot." But I should probably tell that particular half of my mind to go jump in a lake. In any case, really stunning work. Cheers!
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 13:30 CST
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I LOVE Schu. Like his reasoning behind letting Aya tag along as well. Yay! Farf next chapter? Pleae tell me there will be Farf next chapter.
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