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| "The Sous-Chef" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving this, but it so needs an update. I'm feeling withdrawal here.
| Reviewed By: Angel Yuy On: April 28, 2006 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMFG!!!!!!!!!! *passes out from laughing* I started reading this fic on AFF.net, and only recently realised that it's on here as well. So I looked it up and more chapters! *sweatdrops* I was nearly late for class because I had to tear myself away from that hot, HOT, HOT! sex scene. *fans self* And I love the fish market scene. I live in Seattle, with the famous fish market and I think the people there thought I was crasy when I went by there today and couldn't stop laughing. I'm very impressed (and amused) with your versions of the characters, especially Farf. This is only the second fanfic I've found that has a 'sane' Farf that I can actually stand. Oh, and the whole Cort scene was great too. Sounds just like Aya. And the fact that half of the staff now worship him! *laughs some more* *glomps* I really like your work and hope you write more soon!
| Reviewed By: Fyrbyrd On: April 18, 2006 07:36 CDT
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Man even that little scene with Schu protecting Shelley's thoughts was hot. Great chapter, want more! And yes the last one must have been too hot, I didn't even spell my penname right!
| Title: Gloves...
Reviewed By: Vana On: April 10, 2006 18:04 CDT
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Gloves, huh? Gloves could be used for very kinky purposes ya know. The scene where Ran breaks off all of Cort's fingers was totally awesome! That's how you earn someone's respect!! ~NRS, at ya service
| Reviewed By: *mel*soong* On: April 10, 2006 14:57 CDT
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Waaahhaaahaa, I'm enjoying this fic way more than is reasonable. I can't believe you actually worked Sally Schumars into the plot (although she's probably not important). I don't think I've ever read a fanfic with her in it.... and the pony-scene O_O Gah, I did not see that coming! But extremely amusing. Who wants to be a horse during sex, seriously? ^__~ I haven't even commented on the threesome from last chapter. It was magnificent, fucking hot and just what I wanted to read. Merci beaucoup! Sorry if I'm gushing, but have I mentioned I really like your fic? Kind of makes me want to go see New Orleans, I don't know why. Oh, and something else: your Aya gets more and more fun to read every chapter. I'm usually pretty bored by the whole "I'm a silent and angsty swordsman with a sister-complex and I have no sense of humor at all" adage, so your fic is a very very nice change of pace. Your Farf also blows me away. And I even like the interaction with your OC's, who are annoying in 99% of all other fanfics I've read so far. Alright, I'm done, please ignore my incoherent ramblings.
| Reviewed By: soxy On: April 09, 2006 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that chapter was completely awesome as always! I love Aya and Farf's interations... even if some of them are a bit strange. Also I'm all for the Aya-worshipping! Can't wait for the next chapter, Update Soon!
| Reviewed By: KD nsi On: April 09, 2006 21:38 CDT
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umm...getting scared a bit, here. But I still laughed out loud a couple times, and I'm wishing for more, so--YAY!!! Aya happy is a beautiful thing, and soooo love that half the group thinks he's psycho and so worship him...
| Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:22 CDT
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I love a happy (and violent) Aya. I'm so please that, while they are coming in frantic bursts, he's at least experiencing his emotions! As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It's been a real pleasure witnessing Aya's dynamics and progression throughout the story. You're doing an incredible job of writing his journey palpably and believably.
| Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:50 CDT
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more more more!!
| Reviewed By: Vana On: April 04, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*points at strap around face with bucket* already have! ^^ TO-TA-LLY HOT AND SMEXY CHAPTER!!!! Wow... Aya, Yohji and Schu... three incredibly sexy and hot bishes all screwing in the shower... A very well-written threesome scene. most are pretty crappy on other stories, but this one was hot, sexy and wow... all in one! And the fight with Farf and Aya... *gets mental picture* that's just toooooo funny!!!! Now i want a fresh trout to hit my Nyoko-chan! then I'll get hit with a frozen fish, and so on, so forth! It's always soo awesome to see that you've updated! Can't wait till next chapter~ ~Nirvana Renegade Seiga
| Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 21:13 CDT
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to answer your question (which you kinda answered yourself)...never enough yohji...but good job trying
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay, I've read both, and while I don't want to debate, *grin* I wanted to let you know I too would be highly offended. Littlebear not only says you changed your story to please people, but that you changed it for the worst, gave readers a meaningless lemon because Schu and Yohji were just using Aya. (s)he clearly needs to read better, as Yohji and Schu both were concerned about hurting Aya with what happened, and it's clear both care more for Aya than they are quite comfortable with. While threesomes are not my thing, I think it's great you were able to give the readers something so enjoyable in the process of advancing your story. This is *progress* there's no denying living with Aya would be an exercise in self-denial (I'd need handcuffs, leg irons and a...mmmmm--sorry, got distracted) so it's good Yohji and Schu got that figured out. And it's great Aya is willing to let go of his pain, even just for--however long that lasted. *grin* He's actively taking better care of himself, and that makes me very happy. And OMG did I love the fish fight! You made me laugh out loud, and only a wee bit of advance warning on the list kept me from spewing coffee on my plasma screen monitor. I love this. I don't think I will manage to quit reading no matter what you do.
| Reviewed By: soxy On: March 31, 2006 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so f-ing great! lol I love threesomes between those three... I can't wait till the next chapter so don't make us wait too long. Great stuff, Update Soon!!!
| Reviewed By: fyrbtrd On: March 31, 2006 05:53 CST
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Ummm, ha, wah... Wipes drool from face. I'm going to have a cold shower now, or maybe I shouldn't after that one! But it was HOT!!!
| Reviewed By: LittleBear On: March 30, 2006 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed this story so far. It is well written and different from many other WK fics I've read. But I have to say I was incredibly disappointed in this chapter. It started off well, very hot and steamy with the shower scene. But then you ended it so shallowly with Yohji and Schu saying they don't want Aya as part of them and it's only sex. I mean, that's completely at odds with the way you have had them acting towards Aya up to this point. And it's a bit cold in my opinion - it shows that the two of them don't really care about Aya at all, or rather care about him only for sex. I guess I should have expected it. You did say in an earlier chapter that the plan was to make this a Farf/Aya fic, a pairing that doesn't appeal to me at all. And while it's much appreciated that you decided to give something to the reviewers begging for a threesome between Schu/Yohji/Aya, in the end you've made it a hollow and, frankly, sad gift. I plan to continue reading this fic - as I said I believe it's very well written and entertaining (at least until the end of this chapter). But, I just felt I needed to express my extreme disappointment in what you did with this chapter.
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