| "The Swim of Things" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 21:04 PDT
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Lady luck can be a real whore. Finally they have got to 2nd base. Wonder about Shinji's decision in the next chapter. Maybe him as a player and Asuka as waterb... I meant watergirl. Anyway, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 18:47 PDT
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good update
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 19:51 PDT
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great story, keep up the great work
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Title: Just want to mention
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another incredible chapter and love how u gave asuka a break. And to dennnisud, it is CLEARLY STATED in the beginning that the author does not give a crap about what u think because he/she know what they want to do with the story.
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Reviewed By: BML On: June 26, 2006 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably the best post 3rd Impact story I've read.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 11:55 PDT
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I liked the development in Shinji and Asuka's relationship. The whole Rei is sneezing like a anime character, though I would have chosen Lina Inverse from Slayers. Keep it up.
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Title: ch.10
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: June 23, 2006 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter and it had a nice calm pace to it. The story is coming around nicely and the A/S moments are great. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: dennnisud2015 On: June 23, 2006 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this was a segue chapter. I like the developments so far and having Rei sick for the first time in her short life was very approppu. Hickies are definitly Junior high and here a good level for both so far. I expect more heat maybe from an self-absorbed upperclass man who will either zero in on Asuka or Rei and become obnoxious and maybe even a bit dangerous. IMHO Rei as a friend should help Kensuke with his Kaede problem somehow, as she is definitely a pre-stalker in the making. Finally I think after Keiko turns three a pregnant moddy Misato should cause enough disruption at home that will match whats probabvly gonna happen at school. Oh and BTW religious fanatics are a dime-a-dozen so why not those who wanted TI and blame the children for it failing. Fanatics do things extremely just remember that! dennisud
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not much i can really against this story or the others, which i love as well. they are not as sappy as i thought they would from the way u were warning us. i hope u can update soon because u have the only stories in this anime that i actually like cause the rest are just too horrific or perverted. most just launch into lemons without giving a good reason behind it which is good but bland and unoriginal in creative respects.
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Title: ch.9
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter and I enjoyed the "Mommy Misato" parts. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel (not looged in) On: May 07, 2006 03:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was again a nice chapter. So christmas is near. I'm curious about the next chapter.
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Title: ch.8
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: May 03, 2006 10:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter and the story is coming along very nicely. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Kuzy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a great post 3I, S/A light hearted romance. And I just got to put this out there. You got to be from Western Pennsylvania. I caught some Pittsburghese in there. Keep up the great work.
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Title: ch.7
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: April 02, 2006 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great one man and I like the speed at which the s/a realtionship is progressing. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty awesome chapter. Too bad that it will take so long to the next update. I love to see that Misato is so cunning.
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