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Title: Errrr!
Reviewed By: Aya Kazeki On: July 11, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh! You are WAY too good at this cliffy thing! But I love it! Keep up the GREAT work!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 22:47 CDT
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great new chapter. can't wait for the next one!! Keep on writting I can't wait to see just what Kik. has in store for my fav. couple!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: July 10, 2006 20:14 CDT
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Awww....Inuyasha hugged her. That's so smuffy that it made me smile. can't wait forthe next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 15:54 CDT
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Awe, thanks for using my quote! I think I might start doing that too... Soo, 12 days, huh? I know you; you're gonna wait 'til the last day they have to solve the mystery(sp?), blah blah blah. Everybody does it. Don't make Kagome leave! It just got to the good part! *pouts* I just got back from the beach, so I'm gonna take some down-time before I write anything, okay? ^-^ Guess what? I've got something for ya! It's a muse (if you've ever read YoukaiYume's stories, you'd know what I'm talking about)! It's a cross between a cat and an eagle. I'm not that great with animals, but I could draw it for you to let you see what it looks like! You can pick out a name on this site: http://baby-names.adoption.com/origin/japanese.html This one's great 'cause it has the meanings of the names too! TTYL! ~*Kitsune_Magic_1*~
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Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 23, 2006 21:03 CDT
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Damn! So Kagome is actually considering acting upon Inuyasha's previous words.... terrible. Oh well though, makes for a good cliffie! Haha, I'm glad you updated! I'm very eager to see where this all leads, perhaps someone will stop Kagome... hmm? :D Well, 'til your next update! Take it easy!! -Selenide
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: June 23, 2006 16:16 CDT
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NOOO!!!! 12 days left. kagome better find the purest act before they die.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon *Oh no i forgot to log in sorry my bad meant to but forgot also read my stories MUHAHAHAHAHAHA* On: June 23, 2006 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Well at any second in this story it has made me wonder one thing *pauses for a second* Wolf: Don't leave her hangin. White Wolf of the Moon: *hits him on the head with a hammer* Was I finnished. Wolf: *hides in a corner* Sorry master. White Wolf of the Moon: Now where was I. Loup: I dunno. White Wolf of the Moon: Shut-up *fires my patentend hit and no miss rocket* Loup: *runs like a chicken with its head cut off* Call them off call them off. White Wolf of the Moon: No you deserve it for *gets interupted by Ray* Ray: Where's my ice-cream. White Wolf of the Moon: *tries a rope around the freezer and hangs it over a fiery pit of death* Ray: NOOOOOOO *tries to get the frezer* Sita: Don't worry i got ya *Jumps on the frezer and cuts the rope* Ray: You idiot *then they fall down the hole* *5 minutes later* White Wolf of the Moon: We are here to honor the last moments of Ray and Sita. Julia: Yes she's dead *gets hit by a flying hammer* White Wolf of the Moon: NOw to honor their finaly wishes i shall bring their bodys back to life and let them live it again. Sita: You idiot we aren't dead yet *jumps out of the hole with Ray* Ray: How could you. Ookami: Kill the creator. White Wolf of the Moon: Why did i have to let my brain run free. My brain: *pops out of my head* It's not that i just may have acidentaly gone to a crack house gotten drunk and possibly done alot of damage to myself. White Wolf of the Moon: I need a new brain I'll see you later after i get back from the Anything You Want but Nothing You Need Store *jumps out the window* Ookami: We may have made him lose what's left of his mind. White Wolf of the Moon: *jumps back through the window* I'm back from the surface of the sun. Loup: Yep he is way to far gone. White Wolf of the Moon: I have something to finish that i never got to now shut-up and let me start. Loup: Your hair's on fire. White Wolf of the Moon: *sees the fire and turns it to ice* Okay now to finish my first sentence i have found that Kagome will most likely never leave and fall in love with You-know-who. Wolf: You mean Volemort. White Wolf of the Moon: NO now shut-up. Also great story and can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 04:18 CDT
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OMG, OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! I... must... read... MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job i love it i love it i love it i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! it is soo awesome!!!! I cant wait to see (or read, whatever) what Naraku has to say about Kagome being with Inuyasha *gets an EVIL grin* mwuahahahahahahaha *cough* ok now that im done with being evil for today *checks off being evil on list of things to do today* lol :D keep up the great work I am dieing to read the rest!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: June 23, 2006 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Good Good! Keep up on the updates it's a really good story!!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 23:31 CDT
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ohh yay!! An update!! that made my day! Good chappie but i feel like narakus abotu to come rear his ugly head any second now..
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a captivating story. I really like your use of the "Beauty and the Beast" foundation. I am looking forward to new chapters!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Don't worry about your chapters being short at least you update me haven't in a while i need to i will soon stop hassling me. Loup: The creators mind has left the building. My Brain: Damn someone noticed *flies back to my head* Wolf: What the hell is going on here. Ookami: we were giving a review but our master has lost his mind. Sita: That really is the understatement of the year. Ray: I totally agree. White Wolf of the Moon: Just for all of those comments I shall do this * puts my hands on my head and begins thought making* Loup: Everyone run he's making another creation *jumps out the window* Wolf: We must stop him. Sita: No let him do it we need some more people around here. White Wolf of the Moon: And Eureka it is done everybody welcome my new creation Julia she is the first witch i have created. Julia: Why me why did he have to do it *looks at me* I hate you now die *pulls out a bazooka and a freeze ray and fires at me* White Wolf of the Moon: *runs away* This creation is a memory of you and also i forgot to tell you this story was great *runs into the sunset* Loup: He's leaving us again. Sita: Let him go. Wolf: *checks his bag* He took all the cookies again. Sita: Kill him *runs after me* My Brain: He never should have let his imagination run free.
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Title: Eee!
Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 10, 2006 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, wonderful as usual! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! Aw, I'm glad that you're beginning to show a softer side to the rough hanyou, he can be damn arrogant/stubborn sometimes. Anyway, I'm desperately awaiting your next update!!! Great Job! :D take it easy!
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Title: To Comfort
Reviewed By: Kitsuen_magic_1 (nsi) On: June 08, 2006 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't hate you anymore ^-^ InuYasah is realizing his feelings for Kagome, and that makes me happy! Poor Kaede; she thinks Kagome might be dead! She shouldn't because Kagome is just fine... falling in love for that matter! lol Well, Ive gotta get back to writing chapter six for WIWY. I probably shouldn't have put that thing about Koga in there... I'll go fix that, so ttyl! ~*Kitsune_Magic_1*~ P.S.~ quote of the week-(from myspace message--appearance catches the eyes, but personality captures the heart. And sorry for confusing you w/ my last review. -_-;
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