| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: November 10, 2006 12:38 CST
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tHEY DON'T KNOW WHHAT THEIR GETTING THEMSELVES INTO KAGOME IS A EXCELLENT SHOOTER. INUYASHA IS SO HARD HEADED. LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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Title: Review 100
Reviewed By: Kiriane On: November 01, 2006 08:10 CST
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The hundredth review! Yeah! That update took quite a while! I can't wait to see who wins the shooting competition. Keep it up!
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Title: k.e.a.
Reviewed By: kirarasatsuke On: October 27, 2006 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so awsome!i am a big fan of yours and i just wanted to let you know that i think your stories are great!you're really discriptive and your writing style is impeccable.(thats how you spell it, right?)
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Ravyn Crimson Crow On: October 26, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update. This story is great!! I love it!! HURRY UP PLEASE AND UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: KAGheartINU On: October 26, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this fic, kagome should win that gun match agains gan and show inuyahsa who's boss! and she should become part of the gang when does that happen?
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, I wonder if Kagome is going to win this challenge against Gan. Hope so. And hope Inuyasha will see that Kags can take care of herself. So update soon and keep doing what you doing best.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh gods !!!!! you must continue writing this story!!!! i absolutley love it!!!!! I want to find out what Shitora is going to do and if Kagome's gonna bet Gan. please update sooon!!!!! thnxs again for writing it!!!!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thnxs so much for updating it again, while during the school year!!!! I write again when you update!!!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:42 CDT
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omgosh! you finally updated... i dont want to seem like a psycho... buuuuut i've been checkinggg eeeeeeeeeeeeeveryy day since your last update for your next update. ¬_¬ okay from now on classify me as your stalker! i loveee this story sooooooo much! i cannot possibly wait for the next chapter... and lucky you no school! okay now i'm rambling but at least now you wont have any distractions and can get the new chappie out as soon as possible XD! lol.
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 23:37 CDT
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kewl i can't wait to see who wins in the shooting match plezz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Grr U Stole My Name On: October 23, 2006 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T.T i thought u said we wouldnt have to wait that long for an update? lol j/k i understand how school can be......grr school... anyway nice job.^^ oh
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Title: a.k.a kirarasatsuke
Reviewed By: kirakasuke On: October 04, 2006 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay.can anyone say THE FAST AND THE FURIOUS!! thats so totally what i thought when i first read this!! i completely recommended it to my friends!, it was so cool! they couldnt wait to read it.but then...I COUDNT FIND IT!!but now i have and whats better? you updated!!!pleeeeeeaze update soon!
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Reviewed By: kirarasatsuke On: October 04, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a great fic. Keep up the good work! Your idea is so original. It's such an inspiration to lowly beginners.*gets great big puppy dog eyes as tears gather*. YOU MAKE ME WANT WRITE!!!!(wich is saying something)
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Reviewed By: Crane On: September 26, 2006 03:39 CDT
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Woohoo!! You updated!! That's great. I was just wondering if you were going to put in any more of Kagome's aiming abilities in the story. I think it's cool. :) And YAY for lemon! Keep up the good work!!
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Title: future author
Reviewed By: tiffani On: September 23, 2006 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when i discovered you had updated. I had been waiting for it for some time now. I am officially content untill the next chapter comes out. It sucks Yash got hurt by that explosion(sniffles). Glad everyon is okay. i wonder what the fangs enemies have up for them next. I definately can't wait to see how Kagome becomes a WildCat nor what happens when they find out that Gan is a girl. Anyways, excellent chapter as always. Update soon and keep up the good writing.
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