| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet fic, fairly original and i love all the twists and turns. So we finally see how Naraku is gonna have a big part in the story. The only thing that i can say for you is do more Inu/Kag. I know you said that it's hard (akward?) for you, but try? Tkx
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Title: kirara_satsuke
Reviewed By: khftuxkivcl On: August 14, 2006 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! As it turns out I just wrote a review a few moments ago (like 1 MINUTE AGO)saying that I was making an account soon.As it also turns out I just registered with MM a few moments ago too. (writing this review took longer than registering)Anywho, i should get going seeing as its 4:55 AM and i havent slept since 11:30 AM three days ago (im dead serious too)im still going without even a cup of coffee.*Auther:enough about you already!* be sure to update and please be kind enough as to guestimate the average amount of time it takes for another chapter to go up.looking forward to another ingenious chapter and the end of the first story to go on my favorites list. ^-^K.S.
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Title: kirara_satsuke
Reviewed By: kirara_satsuke On: August 14, 2006 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. ive read the whole 22chapters and this is the first time i write?geez!(slaps self on head) anyways, awsome fic. the whole gang plot is genious? and a great read.you pile on fluff but just enough to fit the characters personallity. now, where you got the idea for the girls out fits is beyond me but they sound really cool.(wish i could wear that kind of stuff)my only requests are thats there's more Inu+Kag romance. their relationship seams kind of odd like they're crushing but not quite into it. and its kinda hard to imagine seshomaru all lovey-dovey but i can manage.i also wanted to know if you would grant permission to do fanart on this fic. i was planning to start an account soon so ill just leave my email (kirara_satsuke@yahoo.com)please mail me! anywho, i think you should stick to the idea of thirty or more chapters and not feel like its so long that no one will read it.(I always will!) from my experiences, the best stories are the ones with 5 million chapters.:)(but thats just my opinion.)And thus ends my scholarly review.i hope you were enlightened by my,er, presence.;) ^-^K.S.
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Reviewed By: TIFFANI On: August 13, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really love this story. I love everything about it. I'm glad kagome told that bitch kagura off. as usual i enjoyed this chapter. it made my day when i saw that you updated. anyway, update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: inuyash_kayome_12345 On: August 13, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, its my favortie one so far, keep the chapters coming i want to see wuts happens next
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yess you updated! i'm so happy! this is like my favorite story rite now! i love it all the gang action and what not. good everyones together now. update soon!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness they are together and gettin' along very well. And can't wait til the next ch. And keep it up.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: pinkmiko16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 12:00 CDT
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I really love your story! So far it's great! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: August 12, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. first of all im hyper so bare with me...HOLY F***ING SH*T...I've been readin ur story since day 1..i think i reviewed b4..but cant realli remember...ne who..UR F***IN AWESOME..da story is..no words can describe it..keep doin ur thing.. -lotz of luv peace n respect-
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Reviewed By: InuKagz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 14:13 CDT
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U have to keep this story up I love it and the pairings should get better like what happens w/Shitora and Ranbou and kagome and Inuyasha!!! ^_^
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Title: p
Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: August 02, 2006 21:21 CDT
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Finally their together. I was starting to think that that day was never going to come. Anyway please write a new chapter soon. I want to know how Naraku reacts to the new merge.
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Reviewed By: Halfling Miko On: July 31, 2006 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good chapter. inuyasha and kagome are finally together! and i think that they are making a good choice to accept akago into the south hes a good leader. i cant believ that no one relizes that gan the gun is a woman. doesnt her voice soud slightly feminine? well update soon because this story is hot on my list. XD XD XD XD XD!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:49 CDT
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P.S thank god Inuyasha and Kagome is together !
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man if you think this is a boring chapter you are mistaken! It was good. But there is one thing that is bothering me. Why can't they sence that Gan the Gun is a woman? Well I'm glad that the leader of the Sharks is joining with the South, its good for them that they did. They're not fit to the North. Well hope you update soon and keep it up will you.
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Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: Halfling Miko On: July 27, 2006 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i just discovered it today. i love your original characters and i like the whole gang concept of the story. i hope you update soon because i can't wait until the next chapter! i wanna see if someone finds out that gan the gun is a girl and if kagome and inuyasha or shitora and ranbou FINALLY get together. i love all your pairings but inuyasha and kagome are my absoulute favorite with shitora and ranbou close behind so pleaseeeee continue! XD! ooh and i also want to find out when the other gang members especially the boys who dont like the girls to do anything dangerous figure out that kagome knows how to use a gun and did! that would be a good chapter to read! update soon! XD XD XD!
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