| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Title: Die Hard Fan of this Fic
Reviewed By: BratneySMC06 On: December 21, 2006 21:28 CST
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Love this story chicka its one of the best ive read keep up the good work and get them chapters out asap ps. when is kag going to be an wildcat she so needs to be
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Reviewed By: future author On: December 21, 2006 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. All four men are a riot to be around and I can see where the others inherited their wonder personalities from. to bad most of the wives aren't around anymore. i loved this chapter. i can't to find out what happens in the next chapter. i can tell things are about to heat up between the fangs and naraku's group. So update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Title: Cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 23:31 CST
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This is the first time that I have read this story. I happen to really enjoy how and where it's going, keep it coming I would like to see how it ends.
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Reviewed By: blah. On: December 20, 2006 19:51 CST
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WOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!! you updated : P!!! well..... UPDATE SOON : p hehe.
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: December 19, 2006 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. OMFG...FUNNI FUNNI FUNNI CHAPTER...i lubz it!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ update ASAP....
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 18:44 CST
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omg i love this chapter! it gave me an insight on the families of the gang. in the beginning of the story(i dont know if your remember) you said something about sangos homelife and you never said what. to be honest that bugged me for freakin everyday! now i know that her dads a drunk and she has a mom. haha thanks for this chapter. i have a blog too on xanga its not as bad as everyone thinks=]
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 19:24 CST
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this chapter was erally good! thanks for continueing the story on Kagome and the guns and all. very nice twist at teh end, thoguh,! Please continue writing !!!^^
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Reviewed By: unknownpancakes On: November 26, 2006 20:18 CST
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[Hey there,] Holy Crap. This is easily my most favorite racing/gang stories, ever. Your writing is amazing, keep it up!! I love how you grab the reader's attention and keep them locked on, it's a good trait. Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 17:58 CST
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yes you updated! again, i was waiting for this everyday since you last updated and i just got my internet back from a connection problem so this update was the bestt surprise. update soon.
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Reviewed By: blah. On: November 26, 2006 12:45 CST
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your sooo awsome!!! :) update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NIce just hope Mad Max will get in the Jackrabbits now that hes out of that other gang. So hope you update and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: future author On: November 25, 2006 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really nice chapter.I'm inu is finally going to give kagome a chance. I hope that the wildcats give her one too because she deserves it. Anyway, I get the feeling this is like a preview of the problems with naraku the Fangs and Wildcats are about to have with Naraku that won't be present. Things are about to get more difficult i presume. i can't wait to read what happens next. Until next chapter keep up the good writing and update soon.
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Reviewed By: blah. On: November 24, 2006 20:29 CST
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omg!!!how could you do this to me :( update soon.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 20:26 CST
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come on! oyu gotta update it soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:06 CST
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uughh.! hurry u p and write the nxt chapter and post it! i can't wait any longer
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