| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Title: mygosh!
Reviewed By: great! On: July 26, 2006 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my gosh that was such a twist i never saw it coming! i mean gan the gun is a girl!!! i cant wait until the next chapter. and i like where your going with the pairings could you try to put a little more inuyasha and kagome in there thanx!
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Title: woo hoo!
Reviewed By: woo hoo! On: July 25, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story roocks! i love it youu should update soon!! and i love the pairings!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 25, 2006 00:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally he came to his senses and decided to tell Sesshy about what Naraku is planning. I know it must have been hard for him to decide to risk his sister's life for the life of others. But I have a feeling Naraku is going to double-cross him anyway.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That almost left me speechless. That was THE twist I've ever read. Wow...that was good hope you will update soon. This story is the best in my book. I'm still shock that Gan the Gun is a girl...wow.
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALY LIKE THIS FIC SO PLAESE UPDATE SOON LATERZ!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it has a little of Inu and Kags but hey I'm not complaining about it. And that was funny how Bank and Shitora did. I'm glad that you got somebody for Shippo... nice.So I hope you update soon and keep on, keep on.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I your story shure is kickin off hey update soon and what will happen to kagome/inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 15, 2006 01:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was right about it not being Ayame or Inuyasha. Shippo and Souten are hecka cute I hope their a future couple too. STILL LOVE THE STORY!
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Reviewed By: Roxi On: July 12, 2006 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry 2 lazt 2 log in but omg i love love love this and i love Shitora and Ranbou.I cant wait 4 you to ge them together newayz keep it up
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 12, 2006 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
fINALLY THEY GOT TOGETHER NOW I THINK INU ANG KAGS ARE NEXT. AND I THINK KAGOME WILL BE THE FIRST ONE TO NOTICE THAT THE TWO ARE TOGETHER.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the next chapter is about Inuyasha and Kagome. Well keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: July 12, 2006 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWSSSSS....dat was cute...:D:D:D:D.....dere finally together... update it soon... -lotz of peace n respect n luv-
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 12:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked the chapter w/kagome and the gun when will the others comment on how well she knos how to shot a gun?
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Title: good luck
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thinking for your next chapter you could have a little bit of KagomeXInuYasha along with SangoXMiroku. And I am glad that sesshomaru and rin made up but if I were Kagome that night the fight happend I would of yelled "SESSHOMARU!!" went up to him and 'SLAP'. Just like sango is always doing to miroku.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fanfic and I am only on chapter 9. I am getting so excited of what will happen next. And the one thing that is puzzling me is will kagome and inuyasha fall for "plan hook-up" or will they continue screaming at eacthother. But anyway the reason I gave you a complete 10 on each rate was because I am total InuYasha fan and your fanfic is not like the others I have read, I was in the middle of one called "crazy little thing called love" and then I found yours and strayed away from it because this one really caught my attention. well I should get back to reading. Keep up the good work. P.S. what gave you the idea?
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