| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Roxi Selvetie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the best fan fics i've read.Even though the gang thing as been used before this is my favourite one.Good Job and I hope you write more cause your an awesome writer!!
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its getting good hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoops! posted that in the wrong story lol -__-'' Ah well, it doesn't mean that this story is any less great. :D
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, you can actually feel the character's emotions... Only porblem my be the spelling and stuff, but that can be solved easily by reading it over once or twice before you post :D. A very good story! Keep going.
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: May 31, 2006 20:32 CDT
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hahahah! Wow that sounds like a sleep over I went to. Except instead of whip cream it was water cause we were suppose to be washing dishes. But yeah and my friends brother and his friends were spying on us from the window. Anyway I love this story please write the rest of the sleepover soon!~^@^
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: May 20, 2006 20:43 CDT
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This is not going to end good. Inuyasha just can't stay out of trouble. Fantasic story. Please finsh the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: May 17, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. awesome chapter...i like da operation names also..UPDATE it soon plz n thnxz -lotz of peace n respect-
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. Supprized you have so little reviews... Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I`m loving this fic hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: May 15, 2006 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, sorry that I'm not logged in. But this story rocks! Can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 14:23 CDT
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its still pretty kool n i still luv the story keep up the good work n if u need more song ideas just tell me k laterz. oh yea everything a 10.
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: April 13, 2006 22:50 CDT
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Finally Inuyasha and Sesshy sister is finally there. She about as bad as Inuyasha.lol This story did get a whole lot interesting.
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Reviewed By: Kinuski-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 06:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww... New chapter was soooo cute!! This is great story! Can you tell who wrote "Badboy"? I cant find it!
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its getting really good n i send u mail about the music already. I was thinking u shouldnt make kagome a wildcat cuz in the story u can make alot things happen to her without her being a wildcat but its ur story it was just suggesttion. well laterz i guess. ^_^
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved the race too bad i wasnt there j/k lol. u did a great job with the race chapters n the tight cars. but why u didnt let inuyasha race oh well, so r u going to put songs in the story,if u do put good songs ok. laterz
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