| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: April 13, 2006 22:50 CDT
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Finally Inuyasha and Sesshy sister is finally there. She about as bad as Inuyasha.lol This story did get a whole lot interesting.
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Reviewed By: Kinuski-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 06:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww... New chapter was soooo cute!! This is great story! Can you tell who wrote "Badboy"? I cant find it!
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its getting really good n i send u mail about the music already. I was thinking u shouldnt make kagome a wildcat cuz in the story u can make alot things happen to her without her being a wildcat but its ur story it was just suggesttion. well laterz i guess. ^_^
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved the race too bad i wasnt there j/k lol. u did a great job with the race chapters n the tight cars. but why u didnt let inuyasha race oh well, so r u going to put songs in the story,if u do put good songs ok. laterz
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: March 18, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. u kno wat dis chapter desevers more than a 10..WAY more... neways awesome chapter... -lotz of peace n respect-
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: kinuski-chan On: March 18, 2006 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter was splendid!! And thanks for updating M.I (mild interruption). I cant wait it! I hope you get your fics completed, I HATE incompleted fics...
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: March 17, 2006 21:19 CST
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Poor Kagome! But the outfit Sango picked out for her was cute.Inuyasha getting jealous. I want to ride on back of a motorcycle one day.
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: March 17, 2006 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey... first of all this is da second fanfiction bout racin i luv...ur an awesome writer...n u need to update dis soon time...plz n thnxz -lotz of peace n respect-
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Title: LoVe It!
Reviewed By: kinuski-chan On: March 17, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, there`s only one word that can describe your fic. GREAT! I simply love it! I like that kind of fics! By the way, can you update Mild interruption?? Please!?!?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 04:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty tight story so keep it up n i was wondering if u could put some kool songs in here that would go get with the story like Riddin' dirty by Chamillionaire, 24's by T.I, or ant good songs like that. laterz
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 22:12 CST
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Kagome has a really good memory. That stuff confused the mess out of me. And if Inuyasha was teaching it I really won't be able to focus. So Kagome is a preppy person. ANd Inuyasha and Sesshy have a sister. Wow! I can't wait till she appears. Please write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: NICELY DONE!! On: March 13, 2006 16:11 CST
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i love this sotry and its creativity but dou think u could make more tough? like not gangster tuff but like a girl who has experinced life's problems, not naive but not tainted? and i like how u made kikyou, i hope her and kags can become friends. plz update soon
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Darksaint On: March 12, 2006 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I beleive this fanfic is going somewhere and I am staring to get into it I would have never though Kikyo would have a problem with sex so please please update on it your new fan Darksaint p.s don't worry about Badboy I read that fanfic and your stories are totally different I mean so what you guys have the same names for the biker gangs so don't fright over okay
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:04 CST
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Poor Kikyo! I will admit I am a Kikyo hater but after reading that even I would have done want Rin did. I must be hard for Rin being the leader of the Wildcats and being a sweet, kind person at the same time. Sesshy on the other hand is a expert at hinding him emotions. Can't wait till the next chapter hope the race is in it.
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 15:17 CST
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I'm your first reviewer. Your story sounds like it going to be one of my favorites. I love how it does remind you of Grease. And I love that movie. O please write a new chapter soon. And goes Kagome do thur a transformation to become a WildCat! ^@^
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