| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 17:57 CST
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THAT WAS FREAKIN AWESOME! i looove that chapter! aww yeah now we're getting to the deep stuff. i cannot wait for the next chapter. update soon. haha and unsexual breasts make me laugh. haha.
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Title: hell yeah!
Reviewed By: singleneko On: January 22, 2007 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL YES!! Akago=Gan= L-O-V-E!!! ;) i love it! can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I thought that Gan or Misaki, whoever, is going to tell Akago his- I mean herself! Not him finding out like THAT! Well the secret's out and I wonder what Akago will say to Gan or Misaki when SHE wakes up? I'm sorry but I had to laugh when he was 'betrayed by those breast'. I know it was a serious moment but it was too funny to me. Well hope you update and I really like the idea that you are putting some readers in your next story, nice.
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Reviewed By: animegurl06 On: January 22, 2007 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg plz update soon...i cant wait to see what happens...i love your story...
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Title: Yashie
Reviewed By: Debbie On: January 13, 2007 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funky story. Does this mean it's finished? Bcoz really, I don't know. Loved it though if it is and very wicked. I never was good a t writing fight scenes but you seem to do them really well.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 09:30 CST
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great chapter, but that was a shocker. never would of guessed that naraku wanted kagome for that. but i love fight scenes! so crank out that next chapter nice and quick.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know Kagome is good with guns but wow didn't see that coming, just thought Naraku want her to join to just get back at the Fangs, guess I was wrong on that. So hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 00:08 CST
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I can't wait till u come up with another chapter r u gonna have Kagome tell her life story now? About her knowing how to use a gun? well loved it!!!!!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: colt45 On: January 08, 2007 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oi update *shakes fist*
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Reviewed By: blah. On: January 05, 2007 18:05 CST
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yay! at last someone finds out Gan is a girl : ) update soon
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Reviewed By: bad sango On: December 29, 2006 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic!!!! but when is kagome becomes a wildcat ??? update soon
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Reviewed By: mikle On: December 28, 2006 00:43 CST
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come on hurry your butt up and update ( i didn't cuss cause then you wouldn't update
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonder what dangers they;re going to incounter next. Well hope you update so we can find out. So keep it up. Peace.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 22:10 CST
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please tell me what jiszm or however you spell it means!!!!!!! i need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 22:15 CST
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ooh i love this chapter! i love drama and violence in stories it makes it so much more interesting. i wonder how long it will take for everyone to findout that gan is actually misaki... update soon!
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