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Title: Chapter.10
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: August 22, 2006 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the scene of Human Inu at the begining of this chapter, even though it was rather short! The rest is great as usual, of course! Keep it up, & have a nice day meanwhile!
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Title: Ooops!
Reviewed By: Anina On: August 22, 2006 03:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to add the rating in my last commment... oops?XD~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: Anina On: August 22, 2006 02:59 PDT
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I just checked the story today, when I discovered that there was already chapter 10 published & rated! Ahh! How didn't I realise that?!T__T That setteled, this chapter shows the blunter (& more acting than saying) monk that we all love-hate-love. I have to admit that I didn't expect Miroku to act this bold towards the ladies (especially Kagome) He thinks he's truly a ladie's man here, not just acting like it! Well, that's a side of him that we didn't expect. A side of him that needs to recive a good punishment from a certain hanyou we all know. Go Yashie!!! Beat the crap out of him!-But don't kill him,k?~Anina-chan
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Title: ^^ LOVEN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT GO INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil Rin On: August 20, 2006 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... So far you've given them all fairly ligitimate reasons to be where they are in spite of the lack of the tama. I wonder what you're going to do to explain why the hoshi is a hentai when he doesn't have to worry about a nice little hole tearing him apart by sucking him inside himself. I do not agree with the poster who wants to make her pregnant. She is not currently at mate status and therefore would be a hindrance if pregnant. Not to mention that no other demons would want to lay claim to her (Kouga) if she were "with pup." I am looking forward to what will be done about Rin and Shippo, or if they'll even be in the story at all. Without the extreme power boost of the jewel, the Thunder brothers would not have been able to kill Shippo's father, and at this rate I doubt Fluffy is going to find Rin in time to save her, since it was when Kouga attacked them that she was killed. I wish you luck with future chapters, but I also hope they come out soon, because I want to read them. Be proud. This is by far the longest response I have ever made.
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: August 19, 2006 12:45 PDT
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This is truly my absolute favorite IY fanfic! I really enjoy how you openly display the more animalistic (and more realistic, I think) side of Inuyasha. It's also really nice not having that whole Naraku backstory. One question, though -- they've had sex now quite a few times; is Kagome going to be pregnant anytime soon? I hope so!!
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Title: Heh..I hate the monk. SKIN HIM INU,SKIN 'IM!!
Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 17, 2006 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HOPE MIROKU FINALLY GETS THE PUNISHMENT HE DESERVES, TEH-HEH. AWERSEOME CHAPTER, PROBABLY THE BEST FROM ALL TILL NOW. UPDATE WHENEVER YOU CAN PLEESE.:3
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 09:58 PDT
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wonderful chapter as always. I hope Miroku gets what is coming to him. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: August 15, 2006 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this is getting good, really good!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next I just knew Miroku was going to get himself into trouble and now he's gone and gotten himself into a situaton that could get him killed. And why did you have Kag be the one to take Sess's arm? That was Inu's prize and it should stay that way. But I guess I can forgive you so long as Inu gets to put some damage to him too. Oh and I'm sorry but this is really bothering me it's spelled Tetsusaiga and Tenseiga. When you spell it Tessaiga it can be confused with Tenseiga and it also doesn't allow for the proper pronounciation. Well update soon ok I love this story!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: August 15, 2006 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for this chapter for like forever. Each chapter just has me waiting and waiting on the next. I love this story. It gets me all excitied when I see that you updated or that you wrote a new chapter. Please write another one soon cause you left me hanging again with this cliff-hanger and I just can't wait for another one. Hope to see a chapter soon cause I just can't wait anymore. Please write one very soon cause I don't know how long I can last trying to figure out what Inuyasha would do to Miroku cause he found him with Kagome. Just can't wait anymore. LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: nicole chich On: August 15, 2006 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAHHHH!! I can't wait until your nest update ...this has to be one of my FAVORITE fanfics...so please update soon.
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: August 15, 2006 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh you must update again soon. i so love this fan fic. i cant wait to see what inuyasha does to miroku! i cant believe you left such a cliffy!! your killing me here.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 00:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohh, can't wait to see what Miroku has to do to redeem himself after a first impression like that. At this point, I don't see any reason why Kagome should stop InuYasha from knocking that grabby monk around a bit. That would teach him for trying to steal a kiss. Heh, and I'd just like to say I thought it was really cute and funny that demon-InuYasha started the whole pro-nakedness trend, but now that he's more human, it's Kagome who's more comfortable with it, while he's gone all shy. They're relationship is so cute, and kinda touching, whether he's demon, hanyou or human. I love your story. Thank you for the update and, as always keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Pinkli On: August 14, 2006 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, Inuyasha is possessive as ever. How cute. So glad you updated! I hope he doesn't kill Miroku, though... . Hum, this might sound odd, but I've got to say- Inuyasha better not "mark" Sango or whatever... if he does, that's it for me, 'cause one thing one of the pairings I hate, is Sango/Yashie pairings. They just piss me off. Eh heh. I just can't see him with anyone but Kagome without getting a bit... jealous? Well, see ya next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! i'm so glad you updated!! this is turning into one of my absolute favorite fanfictions!!! lecherous monk. you'd think he'd learn eventually. but, i think that inu might hafta teach him a bit of a lesson, but, i'm sure kags won't let inu hurt him too bad. anywho... i anxiously await the next chapter!!!
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