| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is getting rather interesting, not that it wasn't before, but....lol...here comes our favorite lecher...:P And it didnt take Miroku long either. Almost thought Inu was gonna throttle him on the spot, lol....but it should prove interesting as to what he tells Inu to save his ketsu, lol. Then there's the unsuspecting slayer...Oooh, this should be good, lol. And I think Sess is biting off more than he can handle at the moment. Enter Koga, lol....More to the party makes all that more interesting, lol. Great chapter to an awexcellent story. Update when ya can Onna. :P
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Title: Just passing by...& joking around:P
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 09, 2006 07:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you have a life to mantain, but you surely can't forget about us poor, innocent pathet-patient people who are waiting for your next update of this wonderful fanfic? I hope not. *puppy eyes* But anyway, when you are ready, shout out to the whole world loud & clear that you are so then we (your ultra-loyal plunnies;P) can all hear you real well to run to check this link out as fast as lighting 'kay? Ta-ta for now!
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Title: Here to remind you
Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 09, 2006 07:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Title: Chapter 09
Reviewed By: Luna08 On: August 01, 2006 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese update soon! Thank you! :D
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: July 31, 2006 15:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!~VERY SOON IF YU CAN.
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Title: Chapter 09
Reviewed By: PI-KA-CHU On: July 29, 2006 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: July 29, 2006 02:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEEE!-Pleese
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Reviewed By: Alzea On: July 28, 2006 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic! Pleese update it soon, thanks!
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Title: IYFG?? GOSH!! :O
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: July 26, 2006 12:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
You got nominated on IYFG? Gosh, that's wonderful! You desevered it, this fanfic is really nice! (& Human Inu has finally appeared!!I LOVE Human Inu!!YAY!!) Good luck at the IYFG!!!
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you like the demon side as much as I do! Saw this on IYFG and came over to read. I don't have much extra time and it's nice to spend it on a good fic. Good luck at IYFG! iPoe
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Hyena On: July 24, 2006 03:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON PLEEESE. THIS CHAP WAS BORING.
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Title: Just bored...want to help you out somehow.
Reviewed By: Leo Leonardo On: July 22, 2006 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you probably have a BETA writer somewhere helping you around, but here's a list of the very few spelling mistakes of this chapter you recently wrote. Chapter 9~Unintended MetamorphosisLine 37:Armor~Armour Line 80:Color~Colour Line 102:Gray~Grey Line 126:Cloths~Clothes That's all that I found..the rest looks good to me..you're pretty good in English, & that's good. I look foward to the next update of the story. {I'm sorry if I've offended you someway in this review :( }
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Title: The ears are gone, & I already miss them! :'(
Reviewed By: Anina On: July 22, 2006 11:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So let's see, since it's already time for Inuyasha to turn human, will we be able to see the Spider Demon that almost killed him that same night, or will it be a peaceful one without any youkai attacks at all, at least for that night? I'm at the edge of my seat just thinking about this all! You mispelled here & there in this chapter, but on the whole it's wonderful! I look foward for the next instalment! As soon as you start reading your stories, you just can't stop! Heh!~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: July 22, 2006 11:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I re-read Chapter 9, and I really like the bit where you wrote when Inuyasha & gang where kicked out of the village that they found for shelter when they realised that Inuyasha was a Hanyou. Not that I hate him & acutally have fun watch our favorite Hanyou being chucked out, but many people tend to ignore that bit of Inu's tragic life just because the villagers are human just like us. Phhfftt...it's not like we act better towards other people nowadays. Even though in the manga this tiny weeny fact IS rarely shown (modern touch comes in, I guess) I think all the villages in which the Inu gang payed a vist did say a thing between them just because he was a half-demon. & even though the humans can't hear them (Especially Kagome) they to tend to ignore that fact without them wanting to, but with Inu's really sensitive ears..lord, the horror's the poor guy must have heared & still hears about him! Poor Inuyasha...:'( (Edited because I'm a baka!)
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Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: July 22, 2006 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I re-read Chapter 9, and I really like the bit where you wrote when Inuyasha & gang where kicked out of the village that they found for shelter when they realised that Inuyasha was a Hanyou. Not that I hate him & acutally have fun watch our favorite Hanyou being chucked out, but many people tend to ignore that bit of Inu's tragic life just because the villagers are human just like us. Even though in the manga it IS rarely shown (modern touch comes in, I guess) I think all the villages in which the Inu gang payed a vist did say a thing between them just because he was a half-demon. & even though the humans can't hear them (Especially Kagome) they to tend to ignore that fact without them wanting to, but with Inu's really sensitive ears..lord, the horror's the poor must have heared & still hears about him! Poor Inuyasha...:'(
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