| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Title: chapter 14
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 14:16 PST
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Another awesome chapter. It always makes my day when I see that you've updated this story. I really like the way you have Inu acting and how he's slowly starting to take responsibility for all of his "pack" members. And of course, I'm always happy when Kagome and Inu get a little alone time. It's great how their relationship has gone from rutting to reclaim ownership to making love. Very nice.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 13:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update!! Glad you updated another chapter...be reading more when you update since i luv this fic so much!
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Reviewed By: whirlywheel On: December 11, 2006 12:24 PST
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Well damn I did not see that coming. Here I thought Kouga would survive and become a friend, oh well. I just love this story, I wish you would update more often, though I understand how life comes first. Still I am glad you do update regularly, albeit it is once a month.
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Reviewed By: szaugglaughs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 09:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Looking forward to the next chapter, as usual. I got a kick out of the catnip scene, and the fact that Sango had to be strong and couldn't bring herself to 'submit' was an interesting touch. Enjoying it!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 05:43 PST
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Wow,,, that was really good!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 05:31 PST
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I really enjoyed that last chapter! I loved the Inu and Keg's interaction. I can't wait to see what you have instore for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 05:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, sexy chapter. But they are in a lot of trouble. Sesshomaru is NOT a nice guy in this story, and there is so Rin to soften him up. I just hope they all come out of this alive. I'll be looking forward to the update.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 23:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo...Update! I just love updates, and I was ecstatic when I seen this was. :D Great chapter BTW. Sess can be such an ass sometimes, I swear. And it appears he's being a big one here. He really should listen to the old youkai, but knowing him, he wont. Could prove to be very disastrous to him in the long run. I think he's also underestimating InuYasha. Heh, bigger mistake. I also love the interaction within Inus pack. I was also wondering how long it was gonna be before Sango got disciplined and what Inu was gonna do. Inu seems to becoming a true pack leader here, looking after his humans. I love how you have everything. Again, great chap, and update when ya can. :P
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Title: Chapters 1-13
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New reader of your story here and I have to say that I am impressed! ^^ I haven't yet read an Inuyasha fanfic where the trip through the well was one-way from the start. I also haven't read one where there was no Shikon no Tama or Shikon no Kakera always floating around somewhere. It's still in the story but it's not everpresent. I thoroughly enjoy your creativity and writing style. You manage to keep me interested with a desire to read more. The plto is wonderful! The relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is strong and full of passion, just the way I like it. ;) With Inuyasha essentially being more demon than human most of the time I love how he acts and reacts with his Inuyoukai instincts. However short their conversation was on mating you still made it meaningful. ^^ I was very surprised when Sesshoumaru slaughtered Kouga and his wolf pack but it fits his character perfectly. I commend you on the interaction between Inu, Kags, and the rest of their pack. For some reason I love how well Inu and Kags interact with one another while Sango and Miroku cause tension. ^^ It makes the story so much more interesting, not to mention getting to see more of Inu's possessive nature! Btw, don't worry about adding Shippou because as it stands right now your story rocks without him, hehe. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: November 25, 2006 01:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best stories i've read in a while. i like how u have the story coming from a more realistic point of view and not so much luck, like the other stories. it makes it more believable and favorable among readers. I can't even begin to describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading these chapters. I wish I had some criticism. maybe then my review would be more than just a number on this site. plz review soon i really like this story, im putting it at the top of my list next to 'For All The Things I Didn't Do' story. Check it out some time, get some ideas for future stores and whatnot.^_^ thx 4 listening
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 07:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I really like this story a lot. I do hope you update, please do. And keep up the good work. Happy Thanksgiving.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 16:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, so you're on MM.org 2^^ You kno i luv this fic as hell, and now i'll kno when you update since you're now a fav author!! Now can you PWEASE read my fic!! It might never b as good as yours but it would b nice to get an opinion from some1 as awesome as you =) *Gets on bended knees* :p ONEGAI!!! READ MY FIC!!!! ^__^ oh, n update soon
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 17, 2006 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I just KNOW there is going to be a lemon in the next chapter, YAY!!!! Cuz Kag is covered in that damn blood and shit and Inu is going to go nuts. Damn it though, I was really wanting Inu to come along and tear Kouga to shreds it would have been wonderful and beautiful. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: ch. 13
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 02:54 PST
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This was an excellent chapter. I was truely shocked when Kouga died. I had expected some sort of alliance that reflected what happened in canon. Killing him was a good move. Not only did it illustrate how different this Sesshoumaru is, but it really puts us on notice that you are really allowing this story to flow from the divergent point you created instead of bringing it around to the same thing with some different details. Anything can happen and I can't wait to see what's next.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 11:55 PST
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awwwwww so sad...but i love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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