| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 17:39 PDT
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 15:28 PDT
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I'm so excited that you updated. This is my favorite of all your stories. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is a rather enjoyable twist upon the original story. It is, at the same time, something very similar to the story, and something entirely unique as well. Keep up the good work, and pease continue the story through the end.
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Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is a rather enjoyable twist upon the original story. It is, at the same time, something very similar to the story, and something entirely unique as well. Keep up the good work, and pease continue the story through the end.
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 08:36 PDT
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Glad to see a new chapter! I don't remember whether I've given an R&R before; if I haven't forgive me. I'm enjoying the interesting twist on canon that you've come up with; keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 07:53 PDT
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excellent chapter
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: July 15, 2007 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the update. This is a pretty good story. See you at the next installment. Thank you for sharing. Cynbad146
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Title: Ch. 19
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 06:10 PDT
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Inuyasha and Sango dont do much this time but they both show a lot of character growth. Inuyasha is growing into a leader, Sango has let go of a lot of her prejudice. That was a clever solution to the water.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 01:14 PDT
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I agree with JMaxwell. I must say I really like that you've allowed Sango to have prejuices like those she has, because that allows us readers to follow through the change of her mind. Thank you for yet another terrific chapter!
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Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: July 10, 2007 12:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Sweetie. I'm 1 chappie down from finishing this story. IT'S FREAKIN' FANTASTIC!!!! When will you up-date the next one? I knew from what I had read on Inugrrrl's site that you were one HELL of a writer. Imagine my surprise when I stumbled upon this little beauty. Again, I send you a rating of 100%. I await your next chapter. Thank you. Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 21:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an example of good fanfiction. You've taken the "canon" story, tweaked a couple of minor things about it, and are exploring how that one change alters everything else. The behavior of your characters is believable in the context of the new situation you've put them in, and it's a well-written and interesting story. I really like how your Inuyasha has started out as his transformed (although sane) self and is converging on his manga/anime behavior as he gets himself more under control. I'll admit that I'm partial to stories that explore the inu-youkai fanon in detail, and yours doesn't disappoint. If you want to do even more than that, I won't complain. I also hope you'll put some more time into explaining what's driven Sesshomaru so bat-shit insane. He's the only character that seems vastly different in this AU. Thanks for the story. I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 18:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to add more to the story? I can wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Patty530 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 05:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I loved every word. It was wonderful. Thank you so much for a great read. Please don't leave it there. Update soon. Patty
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 22:03 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update!!!! please update!! its so good i want you to continue. please!!!! *jumps up and down* PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 02:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it I can't wait till you update again!! I love reading something that catches my interest right off from the start and keeps it...Always adds more to the enjoyment factor
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