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| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] | | Pages (26): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 21:48 PDT
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nice to see the story continue..it rare to see one continue this long and still have relevance. hope to see more additions soon
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 15:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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looking forward to how everything turns out... update when you can... please and thank you...
| Title: My Future's Past
Reviewed By: rowdyjaner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 14:36 PDT
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This is an excellent and refreshing piece. Very original concept, very well presented. There are a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but that is to be expected. Well done! I see you haven't updated in quite a while, I hope you will be finishing this story. It is too good to let it fall to the side. rowdysgirl rowdyjaner@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Caim12 On: May 21, 2008 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fic boring after Inuyasha regained his memories and yet insisted on treating Kagome like youkai property right after he said that he wasn't going to continue treating her like that. This sounds quite contradicting, doesn't it? To think that the very detail that made me read this fic was the fact that here Inuyasha was more dependent on his demonic side than his manga counterpart. Original move at the beginning, but after that specific part the story, this dependence becomes too weird to keep you rooted till the end of the plot string- if there is any remaining, that is.
| Reviewed By: Grim.Jr On: May 05, 2008 09:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Many people here are complimenting you about how good your story is, how you portrayed the characters perfectly, YAY NO NARAKU (this point is a hit), great original storyline and much much more, but I don't think that many people noted the other stuff that lurk around this fic. And most aren't that pretty. I had faith in this story. I loved how you gave the Inuyasha storyline a complete different perspective, I loved how Kikyou STAYED DEAD (seriously, she MURDERED the main plot ;;) and I loved how there was more focus upon other demons. Especially upon their demonic behaviour, who STAYED acting like demons with their demonic behaviours and did not transform into some sort of wishy-washy-bashy version of themselves, like what happened to many demonic characters in the original manga. *coughkougacough* And not all demons are animalistic beings with supernatural powers named demonic for the series; for Christ's sake, I'm glad someone else noticed that. But now... plot died and remained dead. There's no other way to put it. And it has been for a long while now, somewhere before the group met Miroku, perhaps when IY turned human was the last plot hint. After that-- KABOOM! The story completely went downhill, from original and creative to HUMP HUMP HUMP with all might and glory. This story completely lost its point, focusing more upon the lemons rather than the actual plot. I like reading lemons or limes once in a while, but this story focuses so much upon them, that its like reading those cheap summer books that focus and depend only upon those random-never ending-out of the blue-not over yet? sex, which for the settings and writer is A-OK; but for the story this takeout just not make any sense at all. Don't get me wrong. I'm happy that you won many awards out of this fic, and that you take all of your fics seriously. Your other works aren't that bad to try reading through, even though they too have their respective flaws, but that's a complete different story. Frankly, this fanfic dissapoints. Kudos for realistic ideas and more feudal behaviours found here than in the manga, but apart from these points, nothing else makes this fic worth to read more than once I'm afraid.
| Reviewed By: Grim.Jr On: May 05, 2008 09:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Many people here are complimenting you about how good your story is, how you portrayed the characters perfectly, YAY NO NARAKU (this point is a hit), great original storyline and much much more, but I don't think that many people noted the other stuff that lurk around this fic. And most aren't that pretty. I had faith in this story. I loved how you gave the Inuyasha storyline a complete different perspective, I loved how Kikyou STAYED DEAD (seriously, she MURDERED the main plot ;;) and I loved how there was more focus upon other demons. Especially upon their demonic behaviour, who STAYED acting like demons with their demonic behaviours and did not transform into some sort of wishy-washy-bashy version of themselves, like what happened to many demonic characters in the original manga. *coughkougacough* And not all demons are animalistic beings with supernatural powers named demonic for the series; for Christ's sake, I'm glad someone else noticed that. But now... plot died and remained dead. There's no other way to put it. And it has been for a long while now, somewhere before the group met Miroku, perhaps when IY turned human was the last plot hint. After that-- KABOOM! The story completely went downhill, from original and creative to HUMP HUMP HUMP with all might and glory. This story completely lost its point, focusing more upon the lemons rather than the actual plot. I like reading lemons or limes once in a while, but this story focuses so much upon them, that its like reading those cheap summer books that focus and depend only upon those random-never ending-out of the blue-not over yet? sex, which for the settings and writer is A-OK; but for the story this takeout just not make any sense at all. Don't get me wrong. I'm happy that you won many awards out of this fic, and that you take all of your fics seriously. Frankly, this fanfic dissapoints. Your other works aren't that bad to try reading through, even though they too have their respective flaws, but that's a complete different story. Kudos for realistic ideas and more feudal behaviours found here than in the manga, but apart from these points, nothing else makes this fic worth to read more than once I'm afraid.
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 12:07 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been putting off reading this story until I had enough time to do it in a short span of time. I am regretting that decision now. This is a great story and I hope that you have not abandoned it. You did make quick work of Kouga, Kikyou is staying dead and there is no Naraku but it doesn't matter. It still captures the attention and leaves at least this reader wanting more. You have Sesshomaru as a perfect enemy, and it is believable for his character before Rin softened him. And since she isn't here there has been no softening. He is as cold and heartless as he appears in the beginning of the canon story. I love how you show the tension of having him as a ruler and how the others might not mind having Inuyasha, or at least Makoto, as the new leader. Please please please PLEASE finish this story. This quality of originality should not be lost.
| Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 22:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a REALLY great story. I mean, not only do you satisfy the perverted tastebuds of many but you have an awesome plot! UGH it makes me so happy. I cant wait for the next update. This story is SUBARASHII! :D
| Reviewed By: Little Rini On: February 10, 2008 16:25 PST
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It randomly occurred to me today that I miss your story.
| Title: OMG
Reviewed By: sfdfdhgfdgf On: February 05, 2008 14:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow it has ben 6 months sense you last updated i take it you quit doing fanfiction i am right aren't i. the lest you could do is at the very lest tell ever one
| Reviewed By: aj On: November 29, 2007 16:04 PST
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what they said this story is so awsome you have to update please
| Title: You won, now what?
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 12:12 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story because, as has been said before, the characters are close to cannon, but the story is unique. You just won another award, so please continue! We want to read more!
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 04:00 PST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-AUAR-Fiction-2n d.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: mic_check1212 On: November 14, 2007 19:32 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is amazing! you did a very good job with creating a new, original storyline that was able to incorporate all the character's personalities without completely changing them. i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: I love it!!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story!! It has an original twist which i love. Please update soon!
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