| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 16:29 PST
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WOW!!! I am glad to see another chapter. I really like the story line. Is Sess going to be THE bad guy in this fic? Just wondering! Keep up the good work can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: swoods On: January 28, 2007 13:20 PST
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=*( cliffies make me sad...but i love the update, now im so curious about what theyre all gonna say to that!
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Title: Nicety-Nice!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: January 28, 2007 11:33 PST
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Great chappie and I love the spider chick. She has a hard on for Kags, lol. Sango though... what a bitch. I expected it though. She's so ungrateful and just a pill to be around -ungh. I did like Miroku however, he's finally "getting" it. The ritual of connecting them reminds me a bit of harpersong's story (One Simple Question), it's great if you haven't read it yet. Then there's Kagome -you make me proud of her. I love the way she handed Sango and Aiko their asses. Sooo much better than how she acts in the manga/anime. Great job, C-note!
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 11:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question for you. Why isn't Kagome pregnant? With all of the times she and InuYasha have made love? That has been bothering me since the first time. During the night of the full moon his powers were at there strongest and they have been active for about a month.
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Reviewed By: GreenWolf On: January 28, 2007 09:55 PST
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This is a great story keep writing.
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Reviewed By: szaugglaughs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the chapter, like how the story's coming along. Go kagome, verbal ass kicker, LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: ch. 15
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 03:21 PST
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Great ending! I think Sango's hesitation is valid. She really hasn't known Inuyasha that long in this version and they haven't had the powerful bonding experiences that they had in canon. This is a big step and everything in her past training would prejudice her against it. I really love how you are showing how people react to Inuyasha just because he is hanyou. I think Takahashi glosses over that too much at times.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 00:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Inuyasha and Kagome are so PERFECT together in this story, like two halves of the same whole. I love their chemistry here, and I am loving the role reversal as well. Kagome is extremely protective of Inuyasha here and her temper flares whenever someone mistreats him...and Inuyasha is the sweet one, giving comfort. That is so nice to see, that they complement each other so well. I am a bit disappointed in Sango and Miroku, though. After all they've been through, they should NOT still distrust Inuyasha or call him a half-breeed. I hope they (especailly Sango) get over themselves quick. I will definitely be looking for the next chapter. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 00:16 PST
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This is the only Inuyasha fanfiction I have read that I didn't tire of and not finish. I was looking of a new chapter from you soon and was happy when I received notification of your posting. This chapter did not disapoint me. If anything your way with words is getting better with each chapter you write. The characters are strong, you add a depth to them that makes them more real. I care about what happends to them next. I look forward to seeing where the story takes me. Thank you for a story worth following.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: inusakura_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 23:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this fan fic. i can't wait for the next chapter, i dont mean to rush you, but please please try to hurry with the chapter, im dieing with anticipation.
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Reviewed By: Lil Rin On: January 14, 2007 17:41 PST
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It's been a month.. *pout* Ok, there's your pestering. Thank you for putting catnip on Miroku. I don't know if catnip will grow in Japan, but it's always great to have Miroku harrassed by a "girl" he doesn't want! :)
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: January 06, 2007 09:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWERSOME. THIS JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK (AND KEEP ON BOTHERING MIROKU! HEH!) OK? OH, AND HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: i have a name??? On: December 29, 2006 00:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is just geting better and better every time you get a new chapter in. but i do have one question inuyasha isn't going to die is he or enyone else for that matter. because i keep runing into sad storys where one dies and then some messed up shit happens. please don't get any ides i really don't want to see anyone die. this story is geting so good please don't make it sad.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 12:46 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: December 11, 2006 22:41 PST
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Another great chappie to add to the pile. Awesome stuff, C-note! Cutesy lemons and I loved how Yashie subdued Sango. Then again, I love when he's dominant & all Inu anyway ^_^ Bravo!
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