| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Namine On: July 22, 2006 10:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated, I'm so glad! Got to admit, I was mildly surpised to see that it was Kagome who actually removed Sesshoumaru's limb from his body & not Inuyasha. Guess it was expected though, since Inu didn't have Tessusaiga with him to chop his brother's arm off. Lol, Kagome did it for him instead! About near the end of the chapter though, there's something that really quers me. When Inu turned human for the first time in the manga, he & Kag had met Shippo (But that could have changed since they met Sango instead) & after the Thunder Brothers bit, a few days (Or a week by the looks of it) passed before they encountered the Spider Demon, thus the night of new moon. In your story though, only 2 days passed since the issue of Fluffy's greeting, & yet Inu's already human. Maybe it's because of time lapse in where Kag spent some time with Demon Inu (God I miss him!), but this still confuses me a bit. Oh well, I'm sure you'll clear all puzzles by your next update. :D Chapter 9, on the whole is another great chapter of yours. & I love tiny plot twists here & there, especially if they're good. I'll look foward for the next update! & big congrats for your acheivement of 100+ reviews. You surely deseved it!
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Title: Review break! :D
Reviewed By: Anina On: July 14, 2006 10:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You broke 100 reviews, that's wonderful! (I had no doubts about that, your story is great!) You certainly DO deserve this! Congratulations!!!~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: Ronnika On: July 14, 2006 01:18 PDT
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YAY!!!! great chapter. Hope that you'll be able to update faster I've been on the edge of my seat since the last chapter. Wonders what other characters you'll bring into your story. Atleast Sango's right about InuYasha being an handsome human! but I love the ears to much *tweak tweak* :P.
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:15 PDT
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Amazing chapter. I have to admit I loved that it was Kagome who took Sesshomaru's arm off while she was protecting Inuyasha instead of the other way around. I love those little twists like that. Excellent job as always. I can't wait for the next chapter. They always end too soon! Congrats on breaking 100 reviews. You certainly deserve it.
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Title: Another good one!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I'm so glad to see that you updated. I can't believe he forgot he turns human one night a month! And Sango seems to be starting to come around. Anyway, I look forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: PI-KA-CHU On: July 13, 2006 08:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Pleese update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 11:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this fic! I love the whole plotline! very good, can't wait to see more!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. I just found it with the latest chapter, and I have loved every bit that I've read so far. I will definitely be keeping up with it from now on. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Piroian On: June 30, 2006 07:15 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're good! Can't wait for the next chapter to come up soon!!
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Title: :'(
Reviewed By: Blue_Thunder On: June 29, 2006 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's like forever now since you've updated! Pleese find some time to update your story soon, cause I'm really curious to find out what's going to happen next now!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Hyena On: June 26, 2006 02:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE CHAPTER, BUT UPDATE THE NEXT ONE SOON PLEESE, THANK YOU. YOU WRITE WELL.
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Title: 100th review!
Reviewed By: Thiera On: June 25, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru's going to meet up with Inuyasha now? Say, will they still fight in their father's grave now since Tessussiga (Sorry if I've spelt the name wrong) was already found by the older brother somehow? I can't wait to see Fluffy transform & read the battle between him & Inuyasha, it will surely still be awersome, fought in Daddy's grave or not! Oh, & in this story, will Sesshy still meet up with Rin somehow or not? I like those 2, & I hope that somehow they'll end up together (Grown-up Rin though! I'm no perv!! XXP) in the manga, but this is your story, so you should decide upon that. Anyway, I just wanted to know whether they'd still meet or not (I'd like to read Sesshoumaru's reaction to that!) that's all! P.S: I'm the 100th reviewer of 'My Futures' Past'!!! WOOOHHOO!! Beat you lamly you fast-typing people!
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Reviewed By: Thiera On: June 25, 2006 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru's going to meet up with Inuyasha now? Say, will they still fight in their father's grave now since Tessussiga (Sorry if I've spelt the name wrong) was already found by the older brother somehow? I can't wait to see Fluffy transform & read the battle between him & Inuyasha, it will surely still be awersome, fought in Daddy's grave or not! Oh, & in this story, will Sesshy still meet up with Rin somehow or not? I like those 2, & I hope that somehow they'll end up together (With grown-up Rin though! I'm no perv!! XXP) in the manga, but this is your story, so you should decide upon that. Anyway, I just wanted to know whether they'd still meet or not (I'd like to read Sesshoumaru's reaction to that!) that's all! P.S: I'm the 100th reviewer of 'My Futures' Past'!!! WOOOHHOO!! Beat you lamly you fast-typing people!
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Reviewed By: Namine On: June 25, 2006 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Sango would have actually acted like this towards Inuyasha had they met in different circumstances (Like in your story) & it would have made a lot of sense. I mean, she was raised in a Demon exterminator village after all, & I don't think the villagers said nice things about their usual way of making a living out of them. The sudden change of heart in Sango towards demons in general in the actual manga seems too unreal for me. It's was a too modern change of heart to be a exterminator man/woman from the fedual era where all what he/she hears about demons are bad things, especially about half-demons. Well, it's like seeing a die-hard Dragon exterminator who killed god-knows-only how many dragons & keeps them as trophies, then one day decides to talk to one & the very next day you see that person accompany the dragons during a village raid & participates in the hunt with them. Too far-fecthed if you ask me. Still, Sango is a vauable person & warrior in the story, so I guess no one can complain about that, demon slayer or not.
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Reviewed By: (*>_ On: June 25, 2006 09:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since Kikyou died old she wouldn't appear in this story? So, no dead clay pot in the way of Inuyasha? Just want to know this...if yes... YAAY!!! & if no..well..it's still ok
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