| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: kekarson@hotmail.com On: May 18, 2006 16:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a wonderful story, I do hope you finish this. It's quite a nice plot, that I have to say is Quite original; though at fisrt i was weary, I'm glad I read this. It's nicely written too. I personally love how you have portrayed Inuyasha. Also the demon habbits, like never eatting in bed, is quite a nice toutch. Otherwise, it was quite one of the best(unfinished I presume) stories I've read.
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 22:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this. it's like nothing i've ever read before. i think the idea is wonderfully original. i can't wait to see what happens. i'm curious if inuyasha will revert to his hanyou self during this story. i am also curious as to how and if, you will incorporate Miroku and Shippou into the story.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 16:48 PDT
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YAY! I'm so glad you are continuing the story. I just wish I could get some inu-kag time because frankly, those humans are obnoxious! I'm so glad you kept kagome nice and kind like she is in the anime, but you didn't turn her into a wimp! In some fanfics, she just let's everyone bully her because she's so nice, but i like that she stood up for inuyasha. Sango is kind of a witch though, she's got a bad attitude and i know she'll come around, but yeah i don't like her right now. umm what else? oh yeah, don't move too fast! I knoe kag likes inu, but if it moves too fast it isn't believable...well i trust you anyway, you're a good writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what I have read so far please update soon.
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Title: love this...
Reviewed By: lunatic kat On: May 16, 2006 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how you are developing the relationship between inu and kag. Demon Inu doesn't seem to pussyfoot around much and I love how direct you're writing him. Can't wait to see what you do next. Please keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 20:20 PDT
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*claps hands* Squee! Inu is attatched to Kagome! And he protects her and cares for her... that's so sweet... I'm so happy about this story. It's so fascinating, how their relationship functions. It's not solely primal, but it's also not all lovey-dovey. It's great. I applaude you.
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Reviewed By: inusakura_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter to a great story. can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dreamer6164 On: May 12, 2006 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT THIS IA ONE OF THE BEST
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Mystic Kat On: May 12, 2006 17:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ToTaLLY sEXiDeLIc mE
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: heavens lil cherry On: May 12, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: staralinga On: May 12, 2006 17:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Kawaii YESH Definatly Kawaii
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: entropy9(not signed in) On: May 11, 2006 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. There are very few spelling errors, making it easy to read. I have also seen this plot before (well similar ones) but I feel like you have made it truly interesting because of your excellent writing style. I really enjoy reading this fic, I admit I don't review often at all (maybe two other times) but I want to stick with this fic and will review every new chapter that comes out! Keep it up, I can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: moonlight black rose On: May 09, 2006 16:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for a nother AWESOME chapter don't give up i love it
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 09, 2006 02:10 PDT
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Damnit, no! Kagome belongs there! Baka, baka, baka! Baka no Sango! *grumble* Besides, that lemon was sweet. I love this story, just how simply instict driven it is... it's wonderful
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 23:55 PDT
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Your story has followed an interesting deviation to the story of Inuyasha. The grammar has been very well done and there have been very few spelling errors. There is one thing that feels 'out of place' and that is the references to Kagome being a pack female and Inuyasha refering to himself as the alpha male. I doubt if those terms were coined in that time period. If he is being ruled by his animal blood to the point he has trouble speaking then refering to himself as the alpha just feels wrong and deflates the emotion of the passage. I realize a lot of fans like those terms but the emotions you showed in the paragraph, I find it hard that any of his words would be coherent. I read very little Inuyasha fanfiction because a lot of the writers end up catering to fanservice and loose the excellent story plots they started with in favor of quick chapters and loads of reviews. So far I have been pleased that your fiction does not fall into this catagory. I hope it continues to be a well written and interesting mature diversion from the original story line.~Fanilia
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