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| "Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 228 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Title: WOW
Reviewed By: cablefast On: July 10, 2006 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the whole story tonight and I think its awesome. I am gulity of not reviewing stories to often but this one was so fun to read I would feel gulity if I didn't. Anyway thanks
| Title: I'm BACK!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens as usual. I just got the chance to read 18 and 19. It was hard, but well worth the wait. I had to have my ever patient hubby move the computer to our bedroom. It's offical I'm now on STRICT BED REST!!!! Doctors orders -_-'. My mom never told me that having twins would be so hard!! I cried for a week, I was lost without my favorite story and writer, so my hubby took pity on me ^_^. And YES I will be re reading this story starting tonight while he's sleeping. This story keeps getting better and better as I read it. You have never disappointed me yet! I feel sorry for Sesshoumaru though. He seems to be so lost. Takana is still my favorite girl though, to bad she had to get hurt. I hope they can work this out, they seemed so happy and Sess really needs someone like her. She keeps him on his toes!! You got 2 respect that!!!!!^_~ I love it and you! SEE YA take care!!!~ B reading U!
| Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I told you how much I love your writing? Everything you write is spectacular. And this is no exception. I love Sesshomaru's internal musings when he is alone. I can't see whats going to happen next. Must...Have...More!
| Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 20:43 EDT
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When is she going to tell him??? But with his nose, I am sure he'll figure it out quick enough, and then what will she do? She must realize that she won't be able to to keep him from the child. Anyway, the chapter wasd fantastic, but I feel so bad for him, silly dog... Can't wait until the next update!
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 18:13 EDT
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wow, another excellent chpater. short, but I enjoyed it thoroughly. I loved your end line - 'then I am dead, and you have killed me' lol, I thought it was excellent. beautifuly done! :D also, yes, I did understand that the burst of passion between the two in the previous chapter was, indeed, between the two, and we can;t place the blame entirely on sesshomaru. no worries there :D also, I know I tend to be (HA! tend to be, my ass. I just am! :P) long winded, and I hpe that it's not ever something you get tired of. I just love your story, and have to say everything thought that it envokes from me. :D glad you seem to be enjoying reading my reviews as much as I am enjoying writing them :D oh, and I can't wait for the next chpater. will he physically kidnap her? (donedonedone...) and when will she tell him about the child? will she tell him? can he not smell it on her? and of course, how will she be recived at the castle? will it get to that? lol, so many questions, and all with answers I must wait for.....
| Reviewed By: FELITTLELADY On: July 07, 2006 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AN AWSOME FIC!!! IT WAS GREAT TO SEE SESSY HAVE SOME SENSE BEING KNOCKED BACK INTO HIM BY BEING TURNED INTO A HUMAN...I JUST HOPE AFTER ALL THOSE TWO HAVE BEEN THROUGH THAT THEY GET A HAPPY ENDING:) PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU HAVE A CHANCE!
| Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: July 05, 2006 11:29 EDT
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Nooo... No, that's so sad. I wanted to cry... It can't end like that. It has to be fixed, it has to be happy... I can understand, but.... it's so wrong ;_;!!!! And congrats on reaching the hundred mark! I didn't get to be it T_T
| Reviewed By: Vickey On: July 04, 2006 11:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a provocative read. Sesshoumaru has got to be a mess with all those leftover human emotions running around. What ever will he do? besides grabbing the one thing in the world he wants and forcing?(a little debatable) her to do the nasty. Such angst. I do like the way you kinda' keep the "dog" in his character. An Alpha dog would try to dominate the female in order to control the situation, but Sess has to remember he's had a trip on the wild human side. He definitely had to know what his actions can cost him as you suggested. And Poor, poor Takana. Can't wait to see what you're going to do with this. I like the twist on this. Didn't expect a lemon on "revelation" day. Shows how intense the emotions are between the two. What a great treat for the 4th!!! Continue. This is just tasty!!
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 02:31 EDT
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oh, by the way, just a quick little note. I'm afraid that on my last reivew I was being alittle cheeky, by posting: [Author ID1: at Mon Jun 26 08:16:00 2006 ] in the middle of my review, but as I forgot to add a little wink, I can understand how it was easily chalked up to some strange glitch. although it was pretty subtle anyway, so it's no wonder that it wasn't picked up on, but I just thought that I would explain myself, as that would also get across the point that I was trying to make by including that. lol, whew. ok, in your last chapter at the point when Takana is talking about her 'monthly bleeding time' jsut after sesshomaru laughs, you have:"I still can't remember my name let alone the physical workings of the female body. I was just surprised that I had forgotten." It wasn't very good but he was not an[Author ID1: at Mon Jun 26 08:16:00 2006 ] adept liar and it was the best he could do on such short notice. :O I don't care myself, but I figure you as the author would be inclined to want to fix these little errors, but of you don't happen to know of them...well..that makes it a heck of a lot harder for you to fix them. ok, lol that took way more than I originally intended. I'm afraid I tend to be a little long winded. but anyway, just thought that I would let you know that, and hope I haven't come off as, like a nitpicker or something.....
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 02:22 EDT
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ok, I'm ging to start off with these two responses to some of your statements in the story before I forget them, and then say anything else I have to say after. sorry if it's a little unorganized. ok, first: "Her expression was inscrutable, one he would have been hard pressed to duplicate" heehe, I loved that line :D second: "something snapped within him. He crushed his lips against hers in the most punishing yet passion filled kiss he had ever delivered." :O oh, sesshomaru! what were you thinking? that was a horrible thing for him to do (as he realised later, but that's a little too late...) lol, wow, I am actually thinking of these characters as real ppl. oooh, and now i feel inclined to cry for Takana's hurt. and omigoodness, the mighty sesshomaru needing to practice self control? that unheard of! ;) wow, that was certainly not what I was expecting for that chapter. I was expecting near bloodshed on Takana's part (as in, she would attempt to kill him with her bare hands for the outrage, heartbreak and humilliation, ya know) sometihng along that lines not an all out mislead sexual encunter involving hate, love, lust, unbridled passion and the need for domination. and I aslo wasn't especting sesshomaru's yokai side to kick in again. I guess I just got really used to him not having one, that the thought of him being un able to control the need for dominance, not only from a lower person (and being all together) but also from the one he probably considered his mate (human or no.) lol, anyway, despite the fact (and maybe even partially because) I wasn't expecting this chapter to go like this, I still enjoyed it greatly. although I find myself a little more eager for the next chapter now, and have high expectations of it. (which I am sure you will deliver, probably without even breaking a sweat :D) I can't wait to find out Takana's further reactions to this horrible shock. OH! and the baby! I forgot about the baby! oh, dear I wonder what she will do now? although I'm sure you intend a happy ending (IhopeIhopeIhopeIhope - I have to much invested in this story for it to have a unhappy ending) there are some - choices or just things that could happen with the baby, like she could miscarry again (from all the stress and heartbreak) or she could choose to abort it ( I'm pretty sure that they had methods for that available at that time, but it was usually a black market type afair) or she could even have the kid and then use it against sesshomaru....ahhhh! wow, what my mind can't think up....anyway, as I said ...er..typed, I'm sure you have a happier ending than any of that planned, so I will try not to worry about that. but how will sesshomaru react? I have seen many (and read a few) sesshomaru has a hanyou kid stories b4, but none of them seem to really have the same level of emotional baggage and the sense of truth (wow, this is really happening, ok no it's not, but I would actually believe it if it were) invested in them. and what will the future bring? will it be like his father adn inuyasha's mther? although i also have the feeling that you won't be carrying that story on quite that long, but I can still wonder can't I? wow, I am running out of space. lol. well, I guess it's fitting as this is the part of the story that the rest was based on (is that right? I think it is, but I'm afraid I have a habbit of misunderstanding some of these type of things) and it deserves a review that has just about used up all of my typing space. lol, I'm only allowed 487 'characters' now, and although I think that I could go on for that adn probably more, I really think that I should probaby end this now, so I don't start to bore you, and so that I can gt some sleep (I always seem to read your chapter updates late at night) because, as I said, it is late. anyway, just to quickly sum up the entire rest of the review: yourock! and your chapter was great, adn I can't wait for more! wow, only 58 characters left now....33....27....21....;)
| Reviewed By: Twinkle On: July 03, 2006 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! Oh the angst. Poor Takana - and the baby ....hmm....he doesn't even know yet. He was human when they conceived, so I assume the baby will be human....but of course, that's entirely up to you! Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, well I knew she would take it badly..but wow. And that was like angry sex. lol. I am dying to read more. I have to know what's going to happen.
| Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::gasp:: She's preggerz!!! Or not... IF she is...would the baby be human or hanyou..seeing as how Sess is human right now...hmmm....
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!~ B reading U!
| Title: The King
Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fanfreakingtastic Ill say it again because my last part of my review got cut off , i love your writing style its like the perfect drug when you read it it makes you happy excited, among other things and it has no side effect but the longing for more . one request that i have is you start replying in the end of the stories again I miss that. keep up the good work !!
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