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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was stick in bed, so I had to catch up on your story so it took a while. Mikkie read me what I missed, but it's not the same as reading it my self. You've got my heart pounding, and the babies always start kickking when I read it out loud to them. I believe you have 2 new fans! We need more please! We are SO LOVING it! Do I sense a lemon coming on ^_~! I'll try to post my story soon I can't wait for you to see it, I work on it on the days when the twins have me imobile.~B reading U soon! Nikkie23534
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooh, I really liked this chapter. He didn't have much agenda, so I hope she doesn't freak out when she wakes up to find a naked sesshomaru laying beside her. However, it should be exciting to see how she does react to it. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 01:15 EDT
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tsk, poor sesshomaru. It's a shame he had to lie, but as you - or rather he ;) said- he really didn't have a choice in the matter. he simply couldn't cause her that kind of hurt, not to mention what she would do kickng him out and all....hmm..I was going to point out all the other reasons, but I realised that I was just repeating what you had wrote in your lovely chapter, and thought how that would be just pointless. I also liked the change-up yu had there with the chapter settings - the day one hundred seventy four(?) - evening (even though, as I said, many many times, I like the way you have it set up normally). of course, you really didn't have much choice, unless you wanted to do a flashback, I suppose. hmmm...I jsut realised that I really don't have anything to say, other than another great chapter, and have jsut been rambeling on almost this entire review. so I'm going to stop now, and let you get back to the other reviews which actually have something to say :) until next time - Lamb :D
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:54 EDT
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You're very right, he does. I guess him lying was the best course of action after all. I can't say I'm disappointed, because I agree with him, which is pretty surprising to myself. But he does need to sort out his thoughts, and think about it, and make sense of it all. It makes a whole lot of sense. I love this. Very much.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah, the inner turmoil that Sesshy has to deal with. Its so obvious hes trying so damn hard to not like her, but its not working one bit. ^^ Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 08, 2006 20:20 EDT
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I know this is a stupid statement, especially for Sesshomaru... But, that shouldn't change anything, just because he remembered... that's so sad.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 07, 2006 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, he remembered. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was so good! I love the way that you write. I can't wait to read more update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 16:45 EDT
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I'm not going to rate this chapter. Tens just aren't good enough for it. This story is great, and I look forward to the next chapter. I'll read it to Mikkie when she calls.-B reading U!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy this chapter indeed. I knew it was only a matter of time until he regained his memories. And I liked it this way, well not the fact that shes so broken up by it, but how the reference made him remember. Very good chapter. I can't wait to see what he does from here. ^^ Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 13:56 EDT
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oOoOoOoOoh...and the plot thinkens! another great chapter! I wonder what seshomaru will do now, and also, what will happen when she finds out who he really is... or should I say WHAT he really is. ooohh I can't wait for the next chapter....no matter the length. ;)
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 13:56 EDT
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oOoOoOoOoh...and the plot thinkens! another great chapter! I wonder what seshomaru will do now, and also, what will happen when she finds out who he really is... or should I say WHAT he really is. ooohh I can't wait for the next chapter....no matter the length. ;)
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 07, 2006 10:29 EDT
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omg...this chapter was awesome!! Update Soon!!! - Cochrann
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Title: Great job!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Just read chapters 7 & 8 together, OMG! This story of yours is amazing! 'Verbal attack of diarrhea' that was the best! I was reading this to Mikkie is on the phone, and she's still laughing at that. Way to put your foot in your mouth Sess! The tension is getting a little bit thicker, it's always a good thing to tease. In my opinion Sess has had it way to easy all his life, the BRAT! I guess he shouldn't be so hard on InuYasha mom. Granted she wasn't raped, but she was force out of her home and she had it worse than Takana. Being a parent ain't easy much less a single parent. At least Takana didn't have that two deal with too. Keep your head up Takana! Again, great story can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks- B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Dragone On: June 06, 2006 07:53 EDT
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Normally I just read quietly and enjoy and move on, but there's one thing I just can't leave this time: "verbal attack of diarrhea" should be "attack of verbal diarrhea" Thanks for writing! Please keep it up.
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