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| "Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 228 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Title: The King
Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fanfreakingtastic
| Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens even more!! I love it, I really can't wait to see what happens next. Secrets are never a good thing. update soon i can't wait.
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 22:37 EDT
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oooh, no! well, maybe if there's a child, she'll be more inclined to forgive him.... oh dear. what an interesting and intricate mess they have made. and not just a child, but would it be a half-demon? because although he is in a humn form now, that isn't his true for. hmm..I wonder if s/he would have little white dog ears.... hmm, anyway, good chapter. I enjoyed it, though it was short.[Author ID1: at Mon Jun 26 08:16:00 2006 ]and you have me just waiting with baited breath for the next few chapters. and to see what sesshomaru decides to do about his...sitution. will he tell her, or will he just let her see for herself.... ohh, the suspense :) lol, also I persoanly wouldn't have minded waitng a little longer for the review responses, I myself enjoy reading them almost as much as the story :D
| Reviewed By: DYquem NSI On: June 29, 2006 22:20 EDT
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I just read some of the other reviews. OH No. It would be just like you to have him be the rapist in a bloodlust or such. that would be evil...
| Reviewed By: DYquem NSI On: June 29, 2006 22:16 EDT
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so... Hanyou or human? which shall she have? I know she fears and distrusts demons, but she's been ostracized by her own people too. You've just GOT to let them have a happy ending, even if there are a lot of fights/ fits and problems after she finds out who he is. She'll ask when he remembered, and feel very betrayed.
| Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 29, 2006 21:28 EDT
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I was wondering if she was going to get pregnant before sesshoumaru transformed back into a youkai. I sooo can't wait to see what's going to happen next! - Cochrann
| Reviewed By: Vickey On: June 29, 2006 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Knowing what the implications are, would a child between them be hanyou or fully human since he is human now? And what if as an earlier reviewer suggested he was the father of the former child? did he attack her during one of his bloodlusts? Or heats or whatever it is the youkai do? I can really see the makings of a huge DILEMMA. Whoa, you are one for creating suspense. Either way, poor Takana. Look forward to reading the answers.
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 00:57 EDT
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Another very well done chapter! very introspective, and gave us yet another incredible glimpse into the unreadableness that is Sesshomaru (albeit a human one...) and the strange conflict that he now has found himself facing. there are few writers out there whom I really enjoy reading as much as you, and find that you always seem to make your stories unique in some way that captures your audiences and holds them to the very end! your characters are rarely ooc (unless that is your intention...) and when they are, it is only slightly, untill you have made that behavior as natural to that chracter after whatever it is you have put them through, as was there original! I love your stories, (two in particular...;)) and you always leave me wanting more! *gapes* wow, I don't know where that came from. I came just to write a review for this chapter, but it seems more like a review of you! lol, or at least your writing and your stories, which as I said, are always of the very best!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get you! I'll be looking forward to whatever ending you think of. Sad or happy, I know it's going to be worth the wait. Great so far and it's been a pleasure reading this. I'm going back to reread 'Her Choice', I just finished my rereading of 'Caged'. Until the next chapter and thanks! P.S. I'll be looking for your email.
| Title: the king
Reviewed By: j On: June 26, 2006 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT !!!!!! i love to see the human/sensitive side of his demeanor of how a brutal war torn monster turns into a caring and maybe even someday loving being. (btw well worth the wait ... kind of antagonizing but great now that the level is there :) )
| Title: wow, just,...wow
Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am going to be so dissapionted when this ends, because there are so few well written OC charectors out there. Not to mention that this is such a well written story. In a way I can't wait to see how you have them react to everything! PLease continue to do what you do and update again!!!
| Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 26, 2006 03:11 EDT
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I'm so happy I can understand what you're getting across! A short chapter, but very important insight. Love it ^^
| Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Sesshoumarus reflections. It explains so much the inner turmoil in his mind and I very much enjoy it. I can't wait to see what you are doing next. Giddyness is always a good thing.
| Title: Brilliant! extremely realistic!
Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 21:14 EDT
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Quote: I absolutely love your reviews, they are both honest and entertaining! Bless you for that. [end quote] *grin* thank you! that is wonderful to hear :D yes, I figured that you were going to us the training more later in the story. It is hard, in a story to have pointless things. things that might happen in real life, but don't exactly match up with the underlying story, so I imagine that you do always have a reason for everything you put in your stories :) yes, your story was a big part of the vindictive mood I was feeling then :) of course, I am always vindictive about that kind, but not always as all-fired up about it. but your story did a good job of brining it alive! as far as it goes with Rin, personally I think I would prefer if Takana was her own woman, as nice as the thought of her being Rin's incarnation is, I really like Takana, and I think that she should remain just Takana. but don;t let me discourage you if your planning to go in the other direction, that one works for me as well, but, as I said, I jsut like the other way a little better :) now for this chapter, I think that you did a really good job with it! It was wonderfully done, and totally believable. I didn't feel for even an instant that something(anything) wasn't as it should be, or would be, were this real. I though you did great with Takana and the way she most likely would have been feeling, etc. just brilliantly done. and with jsut the right amount of lemon-y goodness ;) well well well done!!
| Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 24, 2006 01:36 EDT
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I loved it... it was so romantic, so simply, yet fiery... I loved it completely.
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